*Shortlist: Paranormal*

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Judge 1: 

"His Presence" by Shanrae93 

-Creativity- 8/10 (It was pretty good, something I haven't read but some parts were cliche. It was something different though.

-Conventions -9/10 (She wrote amazing. Thrilling read everything was clear what she wrote and barely seen errors.)

-Plot- 8/10 (Good)

-Character Development-  8/10 (I felt exactly what her characters were protraying and had nice backgrounds so I could connect with.)

-Flow 8/10 (Great)

Total: 42/50 points

"Misunderstood" by JTLightz

Creativity-9/10 (Something really creative. Made his creatures his/her own.)

Convections- 8/10 (Wasn't really interesting. Could have put more engaging words to interest the readers)

Plot- 9/10 (Very Engaging)

Character Development- 9/10 (I knew what the character wanted from the first chapter)

Flow- 9/10 

Total: 46/50

"The dark place" by deejaybee

Creativity - 9/10 (I loved this, probably cause I'm a fan of creepy things.)

Convections- 9/10

Plot- 8/10

Character Development - 9/10

Flow-10/10

Total: 45/50

Judge 2: 

His Presence: Forbidden Love (Paranormal)

Before I begin with the total votes, I would like to point out that this book has less then five chapters (four in total, including prologue) and is entered in the paranormal category. The blurb in the first published chapter, is a summary and isn't reverent to the telling of the story... It isn't made by the author either.

CREATIVITY AVERAGE: 6

CONVENTION AVERAGE: 5

PLOT AVERAGE: 4
(Not much conflict in published chapters)

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 7

FLOW: 5
(Chapters choppy and rushed)

TOTAL SCORE: 27
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** The next two stories scores will be judged from the first seven chapters**
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Misunderstood (JTLightz)

CREATIVITY AVERAGE: 9

CONVENTION AVERAGE:  7

PLOT AVERAGE: 7

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 8

FLOW: 7

TOTAL SCORE: 38
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The Dark Place (deejaybee)

CREATIVITY AVERAGE: 9

CONVENTION AVERAGE: 8

PLOT AVERAGE: 9

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: 9

FLOW: 9

TOTAL SCORE: 43
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Shortlist: 

 1 "His Presence" By: shanrae93

2 "The Dark Place" By: deejaybee

3 "Misunderstood" By: JTLightz

**Note: All stories will be in the shortlist since there were only three entries. 

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