Thoughts as Poetry

Un_______

The ragged red lines on my arm;

Undeserved

But I put them there myself;

Unnerved

I cried a little, but I wasn't scared;

Undaunted

I look at them and feel regret;

Unforgived

Do you think I liked the blood running;

Unstoppable

Do you think I liked the blade scraping;

Unrelenting

No- The blade wasn't at fault, it was me;

Unthinking

No- I wasn't at fault, it was the devil;

Unsatisfied

His demons want more of my pain;

Unfed

His demons feed off my blood;

Unashamed

The demons are out of luck, I'm done;

Unhurt

I am done with crimson stained metal;

Undefeated

Back off Hell, this body is mine;

Untarnished.

Author's Note: Unforgived is not a word; I took poetic justice with that one. Same with unthinking...

I love you if you read my poetry...though I never get comments..:'(

I live for the feedback. I need the feedback...it helps a lot....

Is my poetry too grim?

I know its poetry; its meant to capture the darker thoughts....

If you find my poetry...disturbing....stop reading it....

If it seriously is super messed up though, please tell me.

I think my favourite word is poetess....

Its such a beautiful word...

I want to be known as a poetess...

I get a lot of inspiration for a person on wattpad, actually,

She writes beautiful, amazing poetry...

Her username is RedHare...

I suggest you look at Fantasia....or Jump into Colour...