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Book title:- The Aristocrat's Daughter

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Book title:- The Aristocrat's Daughter

Author:- annabellacx

Reviewer:- emotionheartless

Title:- 9/10

The title was completely suitable but it could have sound intresting when it would have been some mysterious and exciting which attracts the reader towards the story.

Cover:- 6/15

The cover was way too simple and normal so I would like to suggest the author to add some more designs to it to attract the audience towards your story.

Content:- 37/40 ( grammar and punctuation, content creativity, plot, originality )

The author has a good hold on grammar and punctuation, I must say that she has surely taken up alot of time in writing a particular episode with good enough word limit, the plot was also good but a little bit lack of fun like the whole story was almost based on the serious theme with commanding. But I would personally appreciate the author choosing and write a beautiful story like this.

Writing skills:- 19/20

The author has marvellous writing skills but she committed very small mistakes which can be ignored or can find out too it depends on readers but I would like to suggest author that he/she must avoid committing mistakes because these mistakes can make them lose awards in award books.

Overall enjoyment:- 13/15

I enjoyed a lot while reading this story and would like to suggest readers who are into mature stuff can read this

Total marks:- 84/100

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