In the Afternoon (Editing)

In the Afternoon (Editing)

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Read the covers By SyaYari Updated May 19, 2012

17 year old Larissa lives in a mansion with her two best (and only) friends. She thinks that being stuck in this house is boring and completely unfair, so she kicks out every tutor her dad arranges for her. Her opinion changes when, 19 year old tutor, Adam, appears in the mansion's door step. Will she make him go away, just like everyone else? Or, will she let him stay? And, if she does, what will happen? Even more, what will happen with Claire and Vicky?

Why_Even_Try1232 Why_Even_Try1232 Jun 01, 2012
haha (: i know this kind of stuff means alot (: @AlexxaVamppie
SyaYari SyaYari Dec 20, 2011
@Zilaan thanks and LOL i also noticed alot of mistakes in some chapters xD sorry bout that
SHINeexO SHINeexO Dec 20, 2011
Nice chapter! ~ It's very original, and well written. I spotted some misstakes; & I think you should seperate your paragraphs a bit, other than that, you have an interesting plot :)
Xx_AlaNite_Xx Xx_AlaNite_Xx May 17, 2011
its really good! :) 
                              better than i expected it to be
                              its books like these that should  be turned into movies
                              
                              p.s.
                              yay for clumsy guys
                              *wink wink*
                              
jenifa209 jenifa209 Mar 01, 2011
i just added ur story to my library  and i am gonna add it to my phone so i can read it
SyaYari SyaYari Feb 12, 2011
@mylifeisaverage >.< dangit! well, fine! you DONT get a cookie! XD