Holding On (short story - completed)

Holding On (short story - completed)

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Lisa Stanbridge By LisaStanbridge Completed

Yvonne is pining for the loss of her long-term boyfriend, Sean. Six months earlier he wrote her a break up letter and disappeared without a trace. Ever since, Yvonne has never been able to let go. She has been holding on to the hope that he will return. Having complete confidence in their relationship, she is convinced there is a missing link in his disappearance. But is Yvonne holding on to false hope? Is it really time for her to let go?

  • africa
  • distance
  • hold
  • holding
  • letter
  • liar
  • lies
  • love
  • sister
  • twist
LediaDarrow LediaDarrow Mar 17, 2016
Cute story it would fit nicely in a magazine around Valentine's Day.
lore95 lore95 Jan 25, 2016
It's a great short story and I like the open ending. I hope you won the contest. Good luck with your writing :)
love_e love_e Sep 24, 2014
That the end I wanted to read more I hope u continue this story like about their lives :)
RH1N0L1GHTN1NG RH1N0L1GHTN1NG Aug 26, 2014
That was amazing! For a short story! I wish you would continue it though it would be amazing finding out about Nina and Yvonne's relationship 
PeteStanbridge PeteStanbridge May 19, 2014
That's one reason why people shouldn't assume that they, or anyone else, do or do not have depression without expert advice.
shirlin_s shirlin_s Apr 20, 2014
oooh my !!!!:) 
                              
                              this was genius. .. I'd always wanted to do such a story but I didn't have a nice conclusion. ... 
                              
                              
                              I loved it !!!:) like totally. .. voted. .. All stars..
                              
                              
                              ★★★★★