After surviving a deadly storm, Daniel wakes up to find himself on a golden beach, a place he dosen't know.
Is he alone? will he survive.
@RoderickYoung Haha why thanks and no my friend, jessabellx did it for me it's good, I like to add tension as it makes the readers read more, I think lol
How dramatic! I like the way you describe the tension as being like a taut rubber band ready to snap. Nice cover, too - did you do it yourself?
lol thanks C= if you get a chance ive worked more on my second story this one gets updated every blue moon now lol - @sarah801
@ImGoingHome thanks for reading!!! It's good you say that, need to kw what I'm doing wrong to make it betta:) I dnt mind criticizing comments helpful :) thanks for commenting too!!! :)
Hey guys thanks for the votes and it's great if you leave comments to let me kw if I need to make it betta
That's awesome :) thanks. Yeh I try to get the spelling and grammar right. I'm not that great with English haha.