This is a book I am trying to compile. Any and all feedback and critiques are very helpful. Hope you enjoy!
@xxCarleynLexi Thanks. It's an old story and it needs revising. I'm glad you like it, though. I'll look it over and write some more of it, assuming I have a new idea for where to go with this.
I like this story:) It's interesting and different. Even though I'm a christian, and some parts are a little offensive to me, I respect your veiws and i still really like this story:) Good job and keep up the good writing!
This is written really well, it makes me want to read more:) So i think i will:p