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Fall in May

Fall in May

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SETTING_SUN By DarrenDean1 Updated a day ago

May Belle Grimm knows only to well that the hardest falls are the ones that happen to you when you aren't looking...and she has all the scars to prove it.   But May is not your average San Fall girl, and nothing is ever quite what it seems to be with Maybe, both the good...and the not so good.  For starters May can't see...not that this was ever going to stop her from having some fun.   So when May is having an especially dark day  she decides to have herself little adventure...and things take a dark turn for the dangerously interesting.
            For Darren Dean what was to be one the greatest summers of his life has turned into a sick sad joke.  His dreams of working as a Lifeguard at Sunset Beach have been reduced to guarding the kiddie pool at the local Plunge, colloquially known as The Toilet Bowl.   Taken away from his sunshine life at the beach is the equivalent to being banished to hell.  Hell in this case being forced to live with grandparents he barely remembers in landlocked San Fallcon.  A sleepy little town known by the local kids as San Fall... "where even the clouds suck".   So with no beach, no waves, no surf and no life, he is just counting the days until he can finally get back to the beach where he belongs. 
           But both May and Darren will learn the hard way, and that sometimes the person you need the most is the one you least expected to meet.   And the twists of fate that happen to you when you aren't looking out, are the ties that bind you...for better or worse. 
First Place Winner of Romance Genre   ~ The Heavenly Awards 2017 ~
Second Place Winner for Best Romance Fiction ~ The Wing Awards 2017~
Second Place Winner for Best Romance Fiction ~ The Spring Awards 2017 ~

Highest ranking:   #35 in General Fiction as of 10/12/2016

Hahaha nice threats LOL. But no intention of stealing your work man... I love your author's note already. :)
In5pir3d In5pir3d May 06
Lol, I thought the ones that are supposedly mistakes were correct. That the "pre customer" bit just didn't make much sense and in the other occurrence you were just being cool or something. I thought that the actual mistake was "with in" instead of "within".
Well you've already read two of mine but if I see them you know I'll point it out anyway 😜
Purely malicious, huh? I'm not sure that's the word you meant to use ;)
Ruby-Star Ruby-Star Oct 20, 2016
I just tried tremendous times to comment on the title. Did it say this before? Promising a game? Don't fail me now... if there's none...... 😂
Arianna_1204 Arianna_1204 Oct 11, 2016
Everybody needs this in a book. Ain't nobody gonna tell me those aren't the best moments in books.... 😶 LIARS, I tell you.  I like me some good hot scenes 🌚😌👌🏼