Fall in May

Fall in May

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SETTING_SUN By DarrenDean1 Updated Nov 06

May Belle Grimm knows only too well that the hardest falls are the ones that happen when you aren't looking, and she has all the scars to prove it.  But May is not your average San Fall girl, and nothing is ever quite as it seems to be with Maybe, both the good and the not so good. So when May is having an especially dark day, she decides to have herself little misadventure ...and things take a dark turn for the dangerously interesting.
                                         
For Darren Dean what was to be one the greatest summers of his life, has turned into a sick sad joke.  Ripped away from his sunshine life at the beach is the equivalent to being banished to hell.  Hell, in Darren's case being the sleepy little landlocked town of San Fallcon, known by the local kids as "San Fall ...where even the clouds suck".  His dreams of Lifeguarding dangerous breaks of Sunset Beach have been reduced to guarding the kiddie pool at the local Plunge, colloquially known as "The Toilet Bowl".  So with no beach, no waves, no surf and no life, he is just counting the days until he can finally get back home to the place where he belongs. 
                      
But both Maybe and Darren will learn the hard way, that sometimes the person you least expect to meet is the one you need the most.   And the twists of fate that happen when you're not looking out, are the ties that bind you ...for better or worse. 
                                                       
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I like a little hair pull here and there.  A little slam into a wall. ( There is possibly something wrong with me)
Hahaha nice threats LOL. But no intention of stealing your work man... I love your author's note already. :)
Arghh darn it. By later which chapter do you mean exactly? You know, just out of curiosity 😁
In5pir3d In5pir3d May 06
Lol, I thought the ones that are supposedly mistakes were correct. That the "pre customer" bit just didn't make much sense and in the other occurrence you were just being cool or something. I thought that the actual mistake was "with in" instead of "within".
Well you've already read two of mine but if I see them you know I'll point it out anyway 😜
Purely malicious, huh? I'm not sure that's the word you meant to use ;)