The Other One

The Other One

79.3K Reads 943 Votes 16 Part Story
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Lizzie is a pretty, redheaded kindergarten teacher. She is a joyful, open person, but has a quick and fiery temper whenever something rubs her the wrong way, and is sometimes irrationally stubborn. Lizzie's boyfriend of nearly a year, Connor Smith, is everything she could ask for, but there's a catch: Connor has never went anywhere with her in public - not even for one date. Eventually she forces him to go out publicly with her. Everything spirals out of control after a chance meeting with his best friend Nathan Bradley at the beach, and Lizzie has to cope with the mess that has become her life.

wittyfingers wittyfingers Jan 29, 2013
I hope she punches him and kicks him so far n the balls that his great great grandchildren feel it
IncandescentQueen IncandescentQueen Oct 31, 2011
was not expecting that... 
                              Really well written :D Loved it. Definitely going to keep reading :)
fuzzypenguin fuzzypenguin Aug 14, 2011
Wow...that's horrible. She's been 'going out' with Connor for a year, and really likes him only to find out he's married! Amazing cliffhanger...
Emily_Salvatore Emily_Salvatore Mar 09, 2011
The mystery is REVEALED! I voted and commented AND I liked it.:)
NotSoOrdinaryGirl NotSoOrdinaryGirl Mar 04, 2011
Like your story , except could you not make the paragraphs so long? Its kind of hard to keep track of what sentence i'm reading. But hey! Good story! I voted ^^
bluebuffy bluebuffy Mar 01, 2011
omgsh! i was not expecting that. very good story, it's wonderful. you have my vote, and i'll add this to my library :]