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Just Like Fire (ManxMan) #Wattys2017

Just Like Fire (ManxMan) #Wattys2017

333K Reads 16.9K Votes 30 Part Story
Carrie By -carmin Completed

After a bad breakup, Eddie Blue Sharpe decides to move on, he decides to go and leave everything that reminded him of his ex behind. 
    
He moves in with his best friend, got a new job and his life was getting better. He reaches a new height of happiness when he captures the attention of his company's CEO, Elijah Sheridan.
    
    
    
    
    
    Ranked: #2 in General Fiction.
    24/5/17

I cry while eating, drinking, bathing, dancing, singing and sleeping. I just cry. Then forget. Then cry when I remember again. Yeah. That just repeats an endless cycle
I would probably hit the person who made me cry and then move to the other side of the world where they can't find me
Did any one else start just saying why over and over again from some vine I can't remember the name of
DeteraMansion DeteraMansion 4 days ago
Unnecessary amounts of action. All the information is occurring at once. Try to introduce the characters smoothly - have smoother transitions.
I cry, punch walls till I bleed and lock myself in a room and scream until I feel better
unalive unalive 6 days ago
I cry, stay in my room?? I let it all out on my best friends and I stalk his account ._.