Haven't Seen You In Ages

Haven't Seen You In Ages

13K Reads 855 Votes 30 Part Story
U-N-Ited By Light_em_upAIZ Updated Oct 20

MATURE CONTENT: sex scenes, mild coarse language and violence.
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"I'm actually in love with you."

"You can't be serious."

"I am very serious."

"Well what are you going to do about it?"

"I'll show you what I'm going to do about it, just you wait G."

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Dawn and Hugh have always been there for each other; best friends since they were toddlers. They thought nothing could tear them apart. 

Except she didn't know what their parents were keeping from her. She thought Hugh and his family were just moving houses because of financial issues. But she was wrong. 

So when Dawn and her family decides to go on a family vacation to the Sunshine Coast, she happily asks Hugh to come along. 

What she didn't know then was that the vacation was going to turn into much more than just two best friends hanging out. Secrets begin to unravel; not only his, but hers as well, the moment they set eyes on each other. Events that Dawn never thought possible occur, and her life eventually turns in a completely different direction as her past catches up with her, forcing her to relive a memory of another guy...

A previously unknown love creates a whole other world neither Hugh or Dawn would have expected. 

A tale of twisted love, accidental love and true love.

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Please do not copy my work. This is all my original ideas and any relations or similarities to real people are pure coincidence. 

Hope you enjoy!

Faimwahh Faimwahh May 24
I sure am intrigued! I don't really have a problem with its length because it's beautifully written. That's a nice way to start a book :)
Your hook was actually pretty effective! I read many stories like this that have the same drab introduction, but yours effectively caught me. NIce!
flake__ flake__ May 19
Lol nice way to start the book :) didn't expect reading this aha.
TabbyMax TabbyMax Jun 23
That has to be the nicest "don't copy my work" I've seen here. (Everyone gets so violent about this...)
I usually don't like short chapters but I must say that this is very effective for creating a hook- really great start!! xx