Jasey's Prophecy

Jasey's Prophecy

317 Reads 22 Votes 8 Part Story
Chloe By Chloebug01 Updated Feb 06, 2012

Jasey Rae Hollis is used to a life revolving around her three best friends, Alex, Nolan, and Taylor. One fateful night, however, she realizes that she may not be who she thinks she is. Through a series of adventures, romance, and magic, only Jasey can decide who she really is.

  • boys
  • kings
  • love
  • princesses
  • prophecies
I loved the little Prologue insert. 
                              You have a few grammatical errors- nothing major and easily fixable. 
                              You also tend to put unnecessary spaces between things. 
                              
                              But all in all great start. :)
blackdust blackdust Nov 21, 2011
Great chapter! And I feel for Jasey because of what happened! Poor her! She has great friends through. Nolan likes Jasey doesnt he? Anyway keep up the good work! XD
blackdust blackdust Nov 21, 2011
Great start to your story I like it! You could make the chapters a little longer through I liked the part when Nolan is like 'this place is a heart attack waiting to happen.' I laughed at that and I am looking forward to the rest of the story! XD