Broken City

Broken City

86.5K Reads 1.7K Votes 30 Part Story
DeeDee By DDChant Completed

In a Broken City, filled with warring tribes, lives:

A girl with no future
A man with no past
A little lost boy
And those who seek to find him....

....Welcome to Deeta's world.

Deeta Richards has never seen the outside world. Before she was born a banking crisis brought civilization to an end and now no one leaves the safety of the compounds unless they need to, but Deeta still dreams of seeing more than the building she was born in. 
Tom is in the guard, this group are the only people that the tribal elders allow to leave the compound and Tom knows only too well that Deeta could never survive the harshness that exists outside. Then tragedy strikes and Deeta and her Sister Jan find themselves captured by a hostile tribe. Why does Tom know so much about these people? And why do they know so much about him? As this mystery draws to a climax, they discover that their friend Tom is not quite what he seems.....

CJOBrien CJOBrien Jan 23, 2015
Pretty good start to a story. Makes me want to go onto next chapter to find out what happens.
SCAR101 SCAR101 Jan 06, 2013
Ooo, I'm liking the concept of the story! If you haven't asked yet I have a thing for dystopian and post-apocalyptic novels.
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KenMagee KenMagee Sep 26, 2012
Really atmospheric... I look forward to reading more when I have more time. I've added it to my reading list.
DDChant DDChant Jun 11, 2012
                              Thank you so much!!! I really means a lot! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
TimNorwood TimNorwood Jun 10, 2012
@DDChant No prob. I'll keep reading and comment as I go if that would be helpful.
DDChant DDChant Jun 09, 2012
                              Thank you! Wow! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my story and I'm so glad you like it!!! :-D