My Marine Man *Editing Time!*

My Marine Man *Editing Time!*

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Michelle By michelle_my_belle98 Updated Apr 12, 2014

*This story is undergoing MAJOR editing!*

Zoe is an east-coast girl stuck three thousand miles away in California for graduate school: she's young, beautiful, and hardworking, but terribly shy and lonely.
Nathan is a US Marine recently home from deployment in Iraq: he's handsome, fun, and chivalrous, but a haunting past lurks beneath his surface. 
When the two meet, it's obvious there's a special chemistry. But with Zoe trying to discover her place in life, and Nathan trying to get past his horrifying experiences, will their relationship ever work out?

  • marine
  • military
Echo4Echo Echo4Echo Dec 07, 2016
I would fix your cover. The utility he's wearing is Army A.C.U's. You want either woodland or desert Marpat. Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this.
ZoeGruters ZoeGruters Nov 09, 2015
Okay, I have to comment on this. My name is Zoë (I'm not kidding) and I just met this guy who came back from Afghanistan. We're kind of starting to like each other, the resemblance is too real haha
1DsSecretLoverrrr 1DsSecretLoverrrr Aug 23, 2013
I sooo love this :D The nicknames for the grandparents are adorable! <3
xkalopsia xkalopsia May 29, 2013
Perfect. Prologue. You incorporated humor, emotions, and relationships perfectly into this! Just enough background on the character is given, along with a nice amount of detail :) this is a nice introduction to the story and I'M SO HAPPY YOU POSTED. I can't wait to see where this leads! Ahhhh <3