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My Marine Man *Editing Time!*

My Marine Man *Editing Time!*

297K Reads 6.7K Votes 33 Part Story
Michelle By michelle_my_belle98 Updated Apr 12, 2014

*This story is undergoing MAJOR editing!*

Zoe is an east-coast girl stuck three thousand miles away in California for graduate school: she's young, beautiful, and hardworking, but terribly shy and lonely.
Nathan is a US Marine recently home from deployment in Iraq: he's handsome, fun, and chivalrous, but a haunting past lurks beneath his surface. 
When the two meet, it's obvious there's a special chemistry. But with Zoe trying to discover her place in life, and Nathan trying to get past his horrifying experiences, will their relationship ever work out?

Echo4Echo Echo4Echo Dec 07, 2016
I would fix your cover. The utility he's wearing is Army A.C.U's. You want either woodland or desert Marpat. Otherwise, I'm really enjoying this.
ZoeGruters ZoeGruters Nov 09, 2015
Okay, I have to comment on this. My name is Zoë (I'm not kidding) and I just met this guy who came back from Afghanistan. We're kind of starting to like each other, the resemblance is too real haha
1DsSecretLoverrrr 1DsSecretLoverrrr Aug 23, 2013
I sooo love this :D The nicknames for the grandparents are adorable! <3
xkalopsia xkalopsia May 29, 2013
Perfect. Prologue. You incorporated humor, emotions, and relationships perfectly into this! Just enough background on the character is given, along with a nice amount of detail :) this is a nice introduction to the story and I'M SO HAPPY YOU POSTED. I can't wait to see where this leads! Ahhhh <3