A kiss in the dark, love your secret admirer.

A kiss in the dark, love your secret admirer.

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Dorothy Parker By Emofly39 Completed

Jane Anderson is a Junior in high school, she's been crushing on John since they were ten years old. The only problem is, he's a senior and doesn't know she exists. So to get noticed she has a plan, one that consists of her pulling him into a closet, kissing him, and then professing her love. She runs out before he can see her, and it turns out they have a class together. What happens when they become friends and all he can do is think about the closet girl? But at the same time he starts to like Jane? Will she have the courage to admit it was her?

MilkChocoholic MilkChocoholic Jun 24, 2013
I think your title is good, but a bit too long. Maybe shorten it to just "A Kiss in the Dark"
DreamOfAMidnightRose DreamOfAMidnightRose Mar 12, 2013
What about, 
                              Involving A Closet
                              or, 
                              What Happened In the Closet
                              ?
xXx3TimesTheCharmxXx xXx3TimesTheCharmxXx Oct 16, 2011
how about "The Closet Girl" ?
                              hope u find a title soon, i love your writings<3
nightfeelings nightfeelings Oct 02, 2011
How about "my own rival" since she's her own competition for John's love or whatever. Or maybe "Closets, plans, and kissing"
RawrRosiRawr RawrRosiRawr Sep 29, 2011
Just putting this out there:
                              "what's behind the closet doors"
Emofly39 Emofly39 Sep 26, 2011
@ashy_bashy oohhh I really like that one too! :D I think that's my favorite so far.