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Less Of Her

Less Of Her

17.1K Reads 918 Votes 17 Part Story
Impotent Verse By ImpotentVerse Completed

Claudia is a shut-in, a nerd. She creates custom cybernetic limbs, unique works of art. Lumi is everything Claudia is not, exotic, exciting, outgoing. Claudia comes to realise they both have their secrets. Secrets that will tear them apart.

MegMerriet MegMerriet Apr 19, 2016
Incredible imagery. Wow. This is the kind of prose that rivals neuromancer.
CharlesFlynn CharlesFlynn Dec 21, 2016
I thought I had read it all. This blows my mind. Hope it continues. Love the mechanicals!
MegMerriet MegMerriet Apr 19, 2016
Nice. Love the way you turn expectations on their head. The creation is somehow more "human" than the creator.
Lopersix01 Lopersix01 Aug 04, 2015
The writing is very descriptive and beautiful. The idea is interesting and the small amount of world building is lovely.  You really did a good job showing the emotions of the characters.
EvieAnderson EvieAnderson Sep 03, 2013
This is wonderful, it's grabbed me from the start.  Excellent descriptions; subtle and emotive.  I'm looking forward to reading the rest.
HardeeBurger HardeeBurger Jul 25, 2013
@CaasiWendeh There have always been ghosts in the machine.  Random bits of free will and impulse that, when left alone, mean nothing.
                              Yet, when coalesced into the ragged shell of a human being, they become the bitter mote of a soul.
                              Isaac Asimov, posthumously eat your heart out.