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The Water-Man

The Water-Man

149 Reads 8 Votes 15 Part Story
KartheyM By KartheyM Completed

Afton-By-The-Sea is a small seaside community located right on the border between England and Scotland. Founded as a summer holiday retreat, the relaxed atmosphere and idyllic scenery provides the most picturesque vacation anyone could wish for.
    One fateful night, all this pleasantness shatters.
    The famous Dalton House is robbed in the midst of dinner.
    A doctor and his daughter are visiting the town on a much-needed vacation when they encounter a bizarre creature washed up on the beach and discover a centuries-old secret thriving undetected in the depths of the water.
    Life in Afton-By-The-Sea will never be the same again.

KristinMahnke KristinMahnke Apr 20, 2016
I will say I'm interested! So far I can't seem to tie it all together which is a good thing! The synopsis sounds mysterious, the prologue reminds me of the little mermaid, and then there's a robbing? :-D  I didn't see any grammatical mistakes. I look forward to seeing what happens next!