This is the sequel to The Jack of Souls. As of today, August 17, 2016, it is 85% complete. The last 15% will be posted by September. Pleae comment to help me perfect it! :)
Please turn this into a book on Amazon. The first book was brilliant, and from what I have read of this one I would gladly pay for the complete and edited version
Love your vivid descriptions that bring scenes to life. Also love being let into Harric's thoughts. Though not at all likeable Fink is a fun character. "It could be you feeding the birds, kid" reminds me of The Godfather, yet it is so fitting
So glad the story is continuing! Jack of Souls was brilliant, and Knave of Souls (definitely the best name) is starting out just as well. I love the atmosphere you create though I find the idea of dust an moisture having spiritual essence a bit odd.
Great start. I wonder if the sword has special powers? I hope he takes the sword with. That imp isn't trustworthy!