Code Red Assasin (A Sad Short Story)

Code Red Assasin (A Sad Short Story)

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Thetogetherwriters By Thetogetherwriters Completed

A 17 year old girl's family was killed and she was kidnapped. she used her whits to escape only to be found by the F.B.I., who requested her join the E.A.D (Elite, Assassins,District.) finding that she had no other choice she joined and now works with a group of skilled assains. She swore vengeance on those who killed her parents, and she would stop at nothing to carry ITN through.

This may be turned into a novel

ZCoreXD ZCoreXD Feb 22
Two mistakes-I Remember bursting from the tree line and seeing squad cars and F.B.I agents everywhere trying to arrest the my capturers.-U capitalized r in remember and put- arrest the my capturers.-U put my and the
i like the plot, but i think you should add a little more detail. i got confused as to who was doing what, but as i said before i do like the plot.