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The demon fox

The demon fox

85K Reads 3.7K Votes 29 Part Story
MidnightmusicstarZ By MidnightmusicstarZ Updated Jun 17

"Soon everything will change!And then they will be the one sleeping on dirt!" The man yells while walking ahead his dirty clothes all ripped.His companion nods eagerly."Yes soon.And nobody will stop us."he answers his eyes getting a evil glint."You sure about that?"a lazy voice rings through the silent forest.The two man tense and there head snaps in the direction of the voice seeing a 16 year old anbu lazily leaning against a tree.A wolf mask covering his face.The two reach for their kunai pouch only to come up empty."Looking for this."Another voice rings out his voice much colder his eyes a weird red with strange features he was wearing a Raven mask and standing to their right.The two man glance at eachother ready to make a run for it when at their left side a red haired boy stood his eyes the same as the Raven boy only he was wearing a fox mask."Leaving so soon? "Their eyes widen when they realize who they were staring at.
The demon fox.
and his teammates.
There dead.

kura-chan13 kura-chan13 May 29
A small tip: your grammar is quite good but your punctuation could use some work, especially after full stops. Otherwise you are good.
rosymalik rosymalik Jun 20
1,000,000 dollar smile guys! That's my boi my son NaRuTo!!!!! UzUmAkI
DemonNicky DemonNicky Apr 26
Itachi, a great man, and a great husband good job on the man @Levi_Ackerman_Senpai
It is good, but watch out to not jump back and forth between first and third person point of view, as well as breaking the chapter into paragraphs. I am enjoying this story though.
daisy67t daisy67t Jun 22
YASSSSS I FINALLY FOUND THIS BOOK AGAIN I WAS LOOKING FOR IT FOR LIKE 1 WHOLE DAY, NOW I CAN FINALLY FINISH IT YASSSSSSSSS
lil_lonely lil_lonely May 01
Mizuki: *looks around* Did you just summon a bunch of ninjas in one turn?
                              
                              Naruto: Yeah so what? 
                              
                              Mizuki: You can't do that it's against the ninja rules!
                              
                              Naruto: Screw the ninja rules I have a demon fox living in my belly! *beats Mizuki senseless*