Saving Jasper [being rewritten]

Saving Jasper [being rewritten]

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ruinedcity By ruinedcity Completed

Charlotte’s father works for the government—she’s seen enough troubled children to last her a lifetime. When a picture of a boy, who’d been missing for seventeen years, surfaces in a local store…everything changes. Kidnapped just hours after his birth, Jasper’s captor held him hostage in the cellar of her home for seventeen years. He is found and rescued by none other than Jack Chandler, Charlotte’s father. Right away, he’s slapped with a label: a lost cause. Therapists turn him away when he fails to meet ends with them. The perpetual search for his parents hits countless dead ends. Just when everyone’s seemed to give up on him, Charlotte takes matters into her own hands. 

She makes it her goal to save him, no matter the consequences.

devil_mate devil_mate Jul 30, 2014
the trailer is god damn amazing !!!!! and the thing about human mind is perfect !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WEZYFM WEZYFM Aug 22, 2013
yoh that was an intense prolog hope the story is as good as i sounds
JLThomas JLThomas Apr 27, 2013
Loved it!!! Noticed some simple mistakes over the course of the story, but they are easily corrected.
SmileLife SmileLife Apr 26, 2013
I like how you started it and love what the guy was saying about him not knowing life. I would suggest to get rid of the useless extra space's. Other than that it's a good start.
                              
                              Keep it up
Fantasy_girl21 Fantasy_girl21 Apr 25, 2013
This wass sooo sooo sooo captivating!! im utterly speechless...
Tash_1998 Tash_1998 Apr 20, 2013
Woah, really intense prologue. The words stirred up really great, big emotions, and you definitely have a fantastic way with words. Reading on.