An Unexpected Serving

An Unexpected Serving

6.9K Reads 349 Votes 6 Part Story
Luthien08 By Luthien08 Completed

Melanie Fox is a waitress. A shy, introverted waitress. She doesn't expect much from herself or her life. So when she gets offered a job at a classy restaurant, Mel has no doubt that she should refuse.

That changes when she gets home and finds someone waiting for her. Her niece, Hayley. Hayley tells Mel that they'll be living together from now on, and Melanie has no choice but to let her in. They're opposites and don't' get along, but helping Hayley get through her troubles may be just the push Mel needs to believe in herself.

***Top 10 in ChickLit category for Your Story India***

  • change
  • comfort
  • forgiveness
  • job
  • lost
  • love
  • niece
  • restaurant
  • server
  • waitress
  • working
JustReadingThem JustReadingThem May 09, 2016
Mel seems like such a kind lady. It's a pity we don't get to see such kind hearted people very often.
sowmyasundar sowmyasundar Dec 17, 2013
Cute little story. ....!!! The characters were adorable. .love ur writing ! :) ♥
BriaHershey BriaHershey Jun 13, 2013
Hey!!! I adore your story!!! It's such a bummer that there isn't more of it, and what ended up happening with Mr. Sharpe? (I call him sharpie in my head hahaha) but I really do love this story. It was so cute and sweet And Adorable
Luthien08 Luthien08 Mar 11, 2013
@LilianeGrouse Wow! Thank you for your comment. The saying you mentioned suits this chapter perfectly! :)
Luthien08 Luthien08 Mar 11, 2013
@beyagi Thanks :) That book cover took a while to make. haha. All in Paint, so you can imagine. :P Thanks for commenting.
Luthien08 Luthien08 Mar 11, 2013
@BottleBallerina That's so true about Chicklit! I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. :)