Trooper

Trooper

24K Reads 736 Votes 11 Part Story
Wally By wally_lawless Updated Mar 07

Most people think of Stormtroopers as mindless, faceless automatons that are only good for getting shot in blaster battles. It's easy to forget that under that stark black on white helmet there is a person who has lived a life before the Stormtrooper academy.

Read on to see a whole new perspective on the Star Wars universe, told from the perspective of somebody you didn't even realize was there the entire time.

fatpigeon fatpigeon 4 days ago
Good job, Wally. I'd say the first person present slips to past sometimes throughout (EG first sentence) but you can fix that in edit. You don't need speechmarks when someone's thinking (use italics) but you have a great voice here for the trooper and that's a really hard thing to get right. :)
ComplicatedAsItIs ComplicatedAsItIs 6 days ago
I absolutely LOVE this story! 
                              Could you please check out mine too? I only just published the first chapter yesterday. It's published under the name: Tales From The Frontline.
Don't get cocky. What are reference. Han; where the hell are you?!
SirDaaSir SirDaaSir Feb 24
What's the nickname? It's been awhile since I watch Star Wars
scott15709 scott15709 Feb 01
Could you add all the way up to the 7th movie? Mr. Wally_lawless