My Bestfriend's Brother (BxB)

My Bestfriend's Brother (BxB)

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Hailey Dom By hanadulche Updated Oct 30, 2016

Alfred is just an average boy, having a crazy and wild girl best friend and basically being her sister-from-another-mother, but then he meets his best friends brother and all hell broke loose. He is now in love life crisis, figuring out what to do with this situation. FALLING IN LOVE FOR HIS BEST FRIEND'S BROTHER .

My Bestfriend's Brother
Written by: hanadulche/LilBeats23

➰Hailey Dom➰

NOTICE:
The cover used in this book is not mine, I just found it on the internet and downloaded it and laid down some letters on it. Credits to the original owner of the photo.

talbee talbee Oct 23, 2016
but after all that here is some constructive criticism! i think you need to write a little more about the setting so readers can get a better look at what is happening in the environment around this boy and where it is at so they know a little about the history of the place
maryana0712 maryana0712 Oct 24, 2016
MY BESTFRIENDS BROTHER IS THE ONE FOR ME BFB OH BFB OH MY BESTFRIENDS  BROTHER
talbee talbee Oct 23, 2016
great beginning you really get the reader hooked on how mysterious her brother is and how all the boy can do is stare at this most likely handsome mysterious stranger
BasicGuy BasicGuy May 11, 2016
good thing my classmates don't treat me that way and just accepted who I am hahahaha
                              
                              PS. I'm not gay
yaoi_fangirl0959 yaoi_fangirl0959 Jan 16, 2016
The real quarterback is...
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              
                              JOHN CENA!!! 
                              
                              Lol I had to make the joke