My Sonnets and Poetry

My Sonnets and Poetry

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Athena By OlympusPlayer Updated May 08, 2013

A collection of Sonnets by yours truly. They follow the iambic pentameter thing and the pattern abab, cdcd, efef, gg. Kind of like Shakespearean Sonnets, but their my own. As of May 7, 2013, I've added in random poetry as well.

sweetie9559 sweetie9559 Jun 12, 2013 05:11AM
Absolutely beautiful. I did that this year after reading Romeo and Juliette in English. Mine was about valentines day and I think I got maybe an 80
SkollWolf SkollWolf May 07, 2013 04:57PM
This was beautiful, and very deep. Well done. It really related to myself also.
Very nice. I like the word choice here even more and the flow is better. I think this one comes more naturally.
writer97 writer97 Aug 17, 2012 06:59AM
wow. you're so talented. i have trouble writing these all the time!
sweetelude sweetelude Aug 13, 2012 03:15AM
nice.. 
                                    yet i could not say it is a sonnet.
                                    check the rythmic pattern of a sonnet.
                                    but i do really like the message!
SoniyaAhuja SoniyaAhuja Aug 12, 2012 01:50PM
But this is a lovely poem. Just because you mentioned the Iambic pentameter, I wondered about the trochees. I have difficulty getting my metrical feet right almost all the time :(