Hello friends, I am knew to writing. So I would love feedback, advise, and editing tips. This story is still in progress, but what I can tell you about it may help. It is about a group of teenagers who skirt around on Rollerblades shooting each other with paint ball guns. I would also like to point out this a short story, it's a book with small chapters so don't yell at me for having Short chapters. I would also like to point out if you are squeamish there is a brief descripon of bood and bone not super descriptive but be aware.
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