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The Right, The Wrong and Us

The Right, The Wrong and Us

1.9K Reads 44 Votes 6 Part Story
Name.....?? By YourrFacee Updated Jun 13, 2011

Your family are those you should keep closest to your heart. But for Seth Daley it doesn't exactly work like that. He only has his sister, his parents suposedly dead in a tragic incident. Stuck with her through thick and thin. Even forgiven what some may see as unforgivable. Life hasnt been too bad with Ava and the twins though. But when he ends up at boarding school, things change. Shocking secrets are discovered and he's losing faith in everyone. Even Ally, who seems so different might just lose hs trust. Seth's world comes crashing down around him, he doesnt know whats going on anymore. Can he find his way back home?

YourrFacee YourrFacee Jun 15, 2011
@coookiekiller95 Thank you! And oh, erm what made it confusing, I'l edit asap you can private message me the parts that you thought were confusing, or what you think I should edit. 
coookiekiller95 coookiekiller95 Jun 14, 2011
I agree with @peculiarpianist and @Laura_Nicole 
                              I think it needs to be edited cause it was a ittle confusing, but aside of that i ove it!
YourrFacee YourrFacee Jun 11, 2011
@Laura_Nicole Thanks! Yeah, it was kind of a hard prologue to write. but everything comes back later on in the story, and theres way more emotion to come. But yeah, thanks!
Intrepid_Imaginer Intrepid_Imaginer May 25, 2011
*Voted. Captivating story so far! Sad scene. I'm getting teary-eyed. T_T
YourrFacee YourrFacee May 21, 2011
@wheadee Yup, most definitely. Already added to my library on my iPod Touch!!
YourrFacee YourrFacee May 21, 2011
@wheadee Oh okay thats good then. Wouldnt wanna be confusing anyone. Thanks for the vote!!