Dear stranger.. Help me find my parents? (Being Edited)

Dear stranger.. Help me find my parents? (Being Edited)

1.3K Reads 19 Votes 3 Part Story
Lay By Layyxo Updated Jul 14, 2010

Erin has been separated from her parents for six years. A week after her 16th birthday, and she's on her way home to find them. On the way, Erin meets super hot guy Travis who knows more then he lets on.

  • broken
  • chelsea
  • erin
  • hotel
  • jerk
  • parents
  • rain
  • shower
  • stranger
  • travis
Happy_24_7 Happy_24_7 Jul 05, 2010
haha i know what you mean!!! except my internet ‘closed unexpectantly’ like 5 kazillion times so i had to reright it a TUN of times ya anyway
                              i love it i cant wate to see what happens the next day!
Happy_24_7 Happy_24_7 Jul 03, 2010
i love it i hope she finds them!!!
                              and i voted cus i loved it so much
leannee-xo leannee-xo Jul 03, 2010
aha i like your writing, its funny! :L write more this is really good!!
ArieRaven3 ArieRaven3 Jul 01, 2010
wow that is a amazing beginning, you have a really good way of grabbing interest i would love to read more when you add!
wendyandpeterpan wendyandpeterpan Jun 27, 2010
This is extraordinary; it's nice and simple, flows well with the entire paragraph.
                              Keep up the beautiful work & I can't wait to read more (:
chia511 chia511 Jun 27, 2010
omg i want more!! please upload soon!!!!!! please please please!!