Sky Domandee is a very special girl. Magic powers, unhumanly beautiful, can persuade anyone to do anyhing. Yep she's a witch, the highest rank of witch. Her life is just, well, amazing. But thats aboout to change.
You should space out the quotes from the paragraphs, just saying to make it less confusing. I still like it though.
@xLovlie I like it a lot, and I was your first fan, yay =] keep writing