He's My Bodyguard (REWRITING)

He's My Bodyguard (REWRITING)

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Tiffany By IDrawOnMyself Completed

Tori's parents are brutally murdered and police make it their duty to protect her. She is sent to Pittsburgh to live with her new hunk of a bodyguard Rayner. Tori is forced to go to a new school, make new friends, and must protect her secret at all costs. Jealousy and rage break loose when Tori befriends someone who isn't to Rayner's liking. What happens when Rayner's job turns into something more? Can Rayner ignore his feelings and be Tori's pretend brother? Will Tori keep her secret? Is Tori really safe in her new home? Can she learn to deal with the loss of her parents? Is she well guarded from the thugs that killed her parents? Most importantly can she keep her sanity?

  • bodyguard
  • love
  • murder
  • protection
  • tragedy
tam091197 tam091197 6 days ago
Haha I go to UCL (University College London) which sounds bout the same
fefifoeellabelllla fefifoeellabelllla Jul 14, 2017
all I care about at this point is that she's legal so there gonna be some bang bang
Zoya9692 Zoya9692 Dec 20, 2017
Finally someone thought of it. I assumed her food is gonna be wasted each time & it wasn't​ settling with me
10000days 10000days Apr 09, 2017
Just a little comment; your writing is really good so far, it's easy to get in the story. But talking to the reader all of a sudden is not a good thing. It breaks the spell and reminds us we're reading. If you were to publish, that's something your revisor / editor would make you change.
derlisha100 derlisha100 7 days ago
I lost my mum at 7 and never had a dad at least this character had them for 18 years
MicheleClarkSmith MicheleClarkSmith Oct 11, 2017
I'm lyking this book. Y couldn't she go back to the house if they had safes?