My Brother's Best Friend *Editing*

My Brother's Best Friend *Editing*

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Emily By emily913 Completed

Emily's brother is the one and only Zayn Malik. However, she's in love with her brothers best friend and fellow bandmate: Liam Payne, who always seems to have a girlfriend.

When she goes on tour with her brother - will she forget about him and move on? Or will she endlessly love someone she can't have?

that_curly_lad that_curly_lad Sep 10, 2012
I like the plot line, it's creative and different (as different as fanfictions can get ) and Zayn seems really personable to me! xx
BethVictoria BethVictoria Jul 16, 2012
Only criticism is the length but we all get short chapters sometimes, even me :) Really good story line, very quick into the action but apart from that it's very good :) Keep it up honey :) :) x
LoveIsMyLyrics LoveIsMyLyrics Jul 08, 2012
I love the story line, but I think in the future you should make the chapters a tad bit longer. Other than that, I love it!
shefe02 shefe02 Jul 03, 2012
i loved it even though it was short! i think that having it be like this will make it easier to understand to the readers who mostly read stuff about one direction bumping into their newest loves. like me sadly!
                              loved it upload soon thanx!
                              -shefe02 <3