Kitten

Kitten

202K Reads 9.6K Votes 32 Part Story
MissAllyBelle By MissAllyBelle Completed

Bria's family was killed by hunters. It is only her and her little sister Holly left.  She is the last cat shifter and is wanted for it.  She moves to a small town, hoping it is small enough to hide her.  What she is not counting on is meeting her mate, or having him be an alpha.  Will Bria fight the bond, or will she flee the town with her sister?  Her inner cat Megaera doesn't like either idea...

    Freakerina Freakerina Aug 21, 2016
    It's good so far, but paragraph spacing needs to change:
                                  
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                                  It should be like:
                                  
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    FoxsChild FoxsChild Feb 19, 2016
    Black fur and yellow eyes for a cat omg so pretty my cat has black fur and yellow golden eyes always love to stare into them
    fromnetflix fromnetflix Aug 21, 2016
    I've switched from three different high schools this week because decided to move the week that school starts
    Fauna_the_fox Fauna_the_fox Feb 27, 2016
    Don't ever wish to be taller. It's a curse. I kinda wish I was shorter at times. But then I can reach the top shelf so :/
    Kaylakitten831 Kaylakitten831 Jan 04, 2016
    Just a thought wouldn't it be better to stretch it out more. Get to know the main Character more. If feels like your rushing into it too much. Like when the Bria meets her mate wouldn't you want more time to develop their relationship it just a thought hope its not offensive.
    Dead_Flowers_In_Bed Dead_Flowers_In_Bed Mar 06, 2015
    @No_1BIEBERFAN omg, I am dying right now! (NOT to be rude)  I just pictured a weird half cat/human thing like on Teen Wolf but uglier!