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Deceiving Appearances

Deceiving Appearances

2K Reads 37 Votes 11 Part Story
Perla Yunuem By PerlaYunuem Updated Apr 14, 2012

Miranda has lived in New York her whole life. But after a few problems her parents decide to move to Rosefield, Tennesse. 
A small town with a population of 1050 (if you count the vampires that are running a muck). Things were suppose to be better, but they turned out to be the exact opposite. After Mirandas father gets diagnosed with cancer, he and her mother move to Tennessee, where he will receive further medical treatment. Leaving her and her brother, Nick, to fend for themselves. But when people start disappearing, vampires and vampire hunters join forces to try and stop the killings. But how will they do it, and who will they trust in a town filled with deceiving appearances?

PerlaYunuem PerlaYunuem Dec 20, 2011
@ParamoreLuvva thanks, I've found that I've improved a lot. I'll be updating sometime this week. Thanks for reading and commenting:D
                              Demi  looks beautiful all the time:)
@Speak13Now your writing's not bad if you wanna see my writing, my writings bad
PerlaYunuem PerlaYunuem Aug 26, 2011
>.< I suck so bad! If you are currently reading this, I'm sorry for my sucky writing. I am going to fix, and it will probably take a long time, but it will be better. I promise:)
beanerana beanerana Jun 15, 2011
Good starter! I'm not into Vampire stories too much, but I liked the intro! (: Good job!
PerlaYunuem PerlaYunuem Feb 27, 2011
@JasmineGayle Thanks im totally open to some advice thanks for the vote:)
Genimsaj Genimsaj Feb 27, 2011
This is cute, but you have some errors that make it hard to visualize the story. i'll put some tips in your private messages.  I really want to see the contiuation of this. I'm voting you up! =D