Sorry guys, I am currently working on this story!!
I will update as soon as I can!
Wow. I couldn't imagine having to look out for all those kids. By the way, you've got a lot of run on sentences. Watch out for those. Sorry, just saying. = P
WOW poor Holly. That sure is a different and fasinating begining.
please keep on writing this story i really like it and upload soon please thanks
AHH! I'm the first to comment! It makes me feel special :)
Good book, but you might want to add more periods and punctuation lol, cause otherwise it will get confusing.
Upload soon PLEASE!!!! And check out my book, I just uploaded a new chapter :)