Should I go?
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"I was hurt, I was broken..." I said to Eric as I was sitting on the edge of the bed.
"He left me when I needed him the most." I finished, tears wanted to stream down my face, but I fought them back. "These scars were made in anger when he left." I said looking up at Eric and he stood in front of me.
"I'm not a perfect person, Ella, but I would never hurt you." He spoke up and lifted my chin to hold it, then I got up to hold onto his hard biceps.
"Promise me that?" I asked him and he nodded, I feel him press his gentle lips against mine, I cupped one of his cheeks and stand on my tippy toes as he wraps his arm around my waist. "I promise you that." He muttered through our lips.
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