Writing to You

Writing to You

519 Reads 169 Votes 7 Part Story
Layla By Layla_starr19 Updated Aug 20

Ella Montgomery always wrote letters to her mother. Even four months after her mother's death, she still does. The only difference is, she doesn't get a reply. 

Until now.

Noah Hunter is shy and sensitive. He hides his grief behind small smiles and hoodies. He is broken and haunted by his past. When Noah finds one of Ella's letters, he writes back. And everything changes.

The darkest secrets will be uncovered. But will the truth tear Ella and Noah apart? Can they put each other back together?

Try to make shorter paragraphs as there are easier to read and understand but I like where the story is going so far.
I agree with all the lovely people in the comment section 😊
shinytofu shinytofu Aug 27
"At least if I start crying, the rain will disguise it." Omg. Girl, this is barely the beginning of your story and I'm already hella sad. GREAT DESCRIPTION ON THE PROTAGONIST'S EMOTIONS.
Sunburn_11 Sunburn_11 Sep 10
I LOVE THE RAIN, although it's kinda ironic because my name is legit Sunny
I think this is a great start!  The scene is set very well with sympathy for the girl losing her mother, confusion as to why her dad won't visit the grave, and excitement to know more.  Well done 😃
This is good!!! Ive noticed my friends also have read this.. I actually found you from a comment on my friend's book... why does this happen so often