An Endless Hunger

An Endless Hunger

359 Reads 79 Votes 11 Part Story
InkSorcery By inksorcery Completed

New York City's oldest resident hasn't aged a day. Beneath his youthful facade lurks an ancient menace. Experience the nightmare of eternal damnation through the depraved psyche of a nameless villain. Lose yourself in this antihero's shattered mind as he drifts between past and present, dreams and reality.
            
  In the tradition of Gothic vampire horror, An Endless Hunger is a poetic and harrowing journey told in a daringly provocative voice-that of the monster.
            
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  An Endless Hunger is an abstract read that will leave you full of questions, as damnation should.
          
  This book contains intense scenes. Not for the timid.
          
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inksorcery inksorcery Jul 19
@-_smoky_- Thanks! I've been writing for a few years, but my 9-5 is web design :)
I can't help but wonder if the callgirl can seeall thegold-coated (?) tortured women as well xD Or if she's just all "forget the blood and urine smell. Look, gold!" Lol
                              
                              Also, is there a reason you aren't using quoations for his dialogue?
gabbyrosex gabbyrosex Aug 09
I love the beginning. All of it is very well written, the description is amazing and I'm in awe of your talents already!
Overall, an interesting first chapter. We learn a decent amount about our narrator and get some insight into his psyche
The "black and white" part is a little unnecessary since you already made the Noir reference. However, changing to "monochrome" might flow better, if you did wish to keep the bit
BMartin31 BMartin31 Jun 28
Detail is no small things in either of your books and I love it! One chapter in and I'm already enjoying it, then again. I am a sucker for horror :)