Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPE...

By leollaaaay

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[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not ca... More

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NOTE
⛔AVOID DOING THIS AT ALL COST⛔
FORM
PAYMENT
CRITERIA
RULES
INFORMATION DESK
RECOMMENDED STORIES
SCOREBOARDS
Hacienda El Cielo: Heart of Thirst
The Beauty Within
That Quirky Love Story
This Love is Golden
Enigmatic Trip
DREAM HIGH: The Tip-off
He's A Monster
Alert
In love to a girl with a Mental Disorder
Werewolf's Lullaby
11 Things I Hate About You
NOTE
Before We Split Up
'Til The End of Our Song
Underground Society
Dark Realm
The Three Nonsense Questions
Missing One Person
Tantalizing
Off Limits
Someday I'll be a Star
The Death of Solace
Losing to Win
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[WARNING]
La Casa de Carnales: Enzo Zavala
Daughter of Dusk and Dawn
The First or Great Love
The Red Dragon Princess
PRAYER
RULE BREAKER
Secret Agent Series #2: His Uncontrollable Craving
Memories To Last
The Earthquake Survivor
Disorder
Against Time
On My 18th
Crescent Rose
She's The Real Challenge
Save Me (Montiero Series #1)
Stella: Heads Down
Way Back Till Now
The Tale of Creation and Destruction
NOTE
NOTE, YOU NEED TO READ THIS (not an update, still, you need to read this)
Noxious
Turn Back Time
Falta Algo: The Game of Classics (Series #1)
The Mysterious Book of Alia Madrianna
Sleepless Nights
Just One Drop
To Fall Again
Mahal kong Aurora
Goiteia University
Maghihintay Ako
Taste of Reality
NOTE
Poisoned Apple
Munsysturia Dimension
Palace: A Battlefield
Apollo Zapata
Triton Ventura
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Famous For Nothing

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By leollaaaay

Famous For Nothing
guardianlovers
Teen Fiction
On-going

1. Book Cover — the book cover? It's utterly amazing! Simple background, the font used, gosh, it's astonishing. The book cover is screaming "I'm a great story, read me" kind of thing. Great job!

2. Title — based on the title, I can really feel and assume the drama, the suspense of the story. It's one of the nicest and the best comment if someone told you that the title alone gives that kind of feeling... And sa tingin ko ngayon lang ako (I don't really know and I'm not sure) magbibigay ng ganitong score sa title area, great job!

3. Grammar — I can't believe it, you're grammar is very good too! I love how you write! You don't need a lot of improvements and don't need one coz it's already proper! You're doing such a good job at writing realistic dramatization, I love it!

4. Contents — one thing, I was amazed by how you do it. The flow, the emotion, the still unknown story between Kara and Janus is a blast, I love how the story is full of emotions. Great job!

5. Overall Impact — I have never seen myself giving someone such an astounding score. You're the first to get this kind of score, may be the last one too (I'm that picky)...

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Book Cover       : 10/10
Title                    : 20/20
Grammar          : 35/35
Contents            : 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score       : 100/100

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