Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPE...

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[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not ca... More

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FORM
PAYMENT
CRITERIA
RULES
INFORMATION DESK
RECOMMENDED STORIES
SCOREBOARDS
Hacienda El Cielo: Heart of Thirst
The Beauty Within
That Quirky Love Story
This Love is Golden
Enigmatic Trip
DREAM HIGH: The Tip-off
He's A Monster
Alert
In love to a girl with a Mental Disorder
Werewolf's Lullaby
11 Things I Hate About You
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Before We Split Up
'Til The End of Our Song
Underground Society
Dark Realm
The Three Nonsense Questions
Missing One Person
Tantalizing
Off Limits
Someday I'll be a Star
The Death of Solace
Losing to Win
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[WARNING]
La Casa de Carnales: Enzo Zavala
Daughter of Dusk and Dawn
The First or Great Love
The Red Dragon Princess
PRAYER
RULE BREAKER
Secret Agent Series #2: His Uncontrollable Craving
Memories To Last
The Earthquake Survivor
Disorder
Against Time
On My 18th
Crescent Rose
She's The Real Challenge
Save Me (Montiero Series #1)
Stella: Heads Down
The Tale of Creation and Destruction
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NOTE, YOU NEED TO READ THIS (not an update, still, you need to read this)
Noxious
Turn Back Time
Famous For Nothing
Falta Algo: The Game of Classics (Series #1)
The Mysterious Book of Alia Madrianna
Sleepless Nights
Just One Drop
To Fall Again
Mahal kong Aurora
Goiteia University
Maghihintay Ako
Taste of Reality
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Poisoned Apple
Munsysturia Dimension
Palace: A Battlefield
Apollo Zapata
Triton Ventura
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Way Back Till Now

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By leollaaaay

Way Back Till Now
Ginang_Estilo
Fantasy
On-going

1. Book Cover - I love the book cover, simple but elegant, but the book cover screams teen fiction...

2. Title - the title is very attractive as I can really feel the significance of the title to the story, but isn't it a bit teen fiction-y or a bit romance-y?

3. Grammar - I really love how you nailed the Filipino Grammar! Seriously! I sucked at Filipino so these envious feelings are really natural. Hehe...

4. Contents - I won't make it longer anymore... The genre doesn't fit the story. I think Historical Fiction or General Fiction fits this story more, hindi fantasy. This story screams more of those two genres than fantasy.











I like how the narrations goes thou.

5. Overall Impact - I'm impressed that you pulled off such majestic story but at the same time, somehow doubtful about the genre you picked.

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Book Cover : 07/10
Title : 15/20
Grammar : 35/35
Contents : 17/25
Overall Impact: 07/10
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Total Score : 81/100

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