Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPE...

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[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not ca... More

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CRITERIA
RULES
INFORMATION DESK
RECOMMENDED STORIES
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Hacienda El Cielo: Heart of Thirst
The Beauty Within
That Quirky Love Story
This Love is Golden
Enigmatic Trip
DREAM HIGH: The Tip-off
He's A Monster
Alert
In love to a girl with a Mental Disorder
Werewolf's Lullaby
11 Things I Hate About You
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Before We Split Up
'Til The End of Our Song
Underground Society
Dark Realm
The Three Nonsense Questions
Missing One Person
Tantalizing
Off Limits
Someday I'll be a Star
Losing to Win
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[WARNING]
La Casa de Carnales: Enzo Zavala
Daughter of Dusk and Dawn
The First or Great Love
The Red Dragon Princess
PRAYER
RULE BREAKER
Secret Agent Series #2: His Uncontrollable Craving
Memories To Last
The Earthquake Survivor
Disorder
Against Time
On My 18th
Crescent Rose
She's The Real Challenge
Save Me (Montiero Series #1)
Stella: Heads Down
Way Back Till Now
The Tale of Creation and Destruction
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NOTE, YOU NEED TO READ THIS (not an update, still, you need to read this)
Noxious
Turn Back Time
Famous For Nothing
Falta Algo: The Game of Classics (Series #1)
The Mysterious Book of Alia Madrianna
Sleepless Nights
Just One Drop
To Fall Again
Mahal kong Aurora
Goiteia University
Maghihintay Ako
Taste of Reality
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Poisoned Apple
Munsysturia Dimension
Palace: A Battlefield
Apollo Zapata
Triton Ventura
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The Death of Solace

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By leollaaaay

The Death of Solace
gery_anne
Teen Fiction
On-going

1. Book Cover - I love the simplicity of the book cover and the font used for the cover. It's very aesthetic and very pleasing to the eyes. PERFECT SCORE!

2. Title - for me, the title is really alluring and really pleasing yet not attractive. It sounds so pleasing in the ears yet some readers might have a hard time thinking about it or something like that (maybe it's just me, whatever) but I really love it. Good job!

3. Grammar - I love how perfect the grammar is, English or Filipino, it is really great. Hindi ako marunong magSpanish pero, I think it's great. LOL.

4. Contents - I love how Solace and Quillon complements each other. Para silang Yin at Yang. Solace is a nice and kind kind of person but she has an evil side that only Quillon can see, while Quillon is a bad kind of guy that is only good to Solace. Hindi na bago ang ganitong prompt pero yung paraan kasi ng pagkakasulat, yung bawat dialogue, thoughts, actions, lahat ay malinis, maganda, at pulido. Para silang mga totoong tao na inilagay lang ang kwento sa Wattpad. Minsan ay napapairap na lang ako pagnakakarinig ako ng Mafia prompts dahil minsan ay medyo unreal na pero yung way ng pagsulat mo ay realistic. It's making the mood really cool! Yah! Great job, people!

5. Overall Impact - Hindi ko alam kung may maidadagdag pa ko sa sinabi ko sa itaas. It's just that, for me, it's perfect. The flow is not too fast and too slow, which made it better, because it shows the readers (us), before Quillon fell for her because of her screaming pure joy and innocence made it better as it really breaks the stereotype of someone falling in love because they are attractive and such. Damn.

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Book Cover: 10/10
Title: 19/20
Grammar: 35/35
Content: 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score: 99/100

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