Book Name: only one night
Genre: Short Story
Author Name: IVelez1
Judge: SaachiDudani
Cover: I absolutely loved the cover. It's natural yet virtual. Picture perfect. Font is also good but could have been better if it would have been completely light. Score: 0.7/1
Title: On point. For one shots, you cannot write something too big and complicated. Score: 0.8/1
Description: Perf...I could have said that only if you could have put in a quote there. This was what a description is like. Try to add some emotions to it like quotes or sayings, something. Score: 0.7/1
Beginning: A too short one shot but something that I absolutely felt like giving a complete read. There's one pressure on writers of one shots, they need to put their everything in one single piece. As I said, once I started reading it couldn't stop myself from reading it entirely. Score: 1.7/2
Total: 3.9/5