loving you is hurt

By Venomika

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This is a story about Gauri and Omkara , where Omkara just hates gauri and only marries her for a deal and... More

introduction (re-written)
flash back prologue 6 years ago
Teaser prologue (custody)
Chapter 1-Anniversary
Deal is over
Truth
Father Daughter moments
Gauri's outburst
one chance
Family
Perfect Family
Broken hearts
deal, trust and anger
Betrayal
Happiness
Broken trust
truth, anger , and madness
Despair
Lies
Beautiful Lie
Regret
Revenge Starts Now
Custody
You Feel It
ShivOmRu's mission
Masterplans
Jealousy, deal, and a plan
A Plan to Kill
Celebrations
Deadly Plans
Twisted Marriage
Om's irritation
Devious plans
Accident and pain
Evil plans
Dabang gauri
Anger
Is this the End?
The beginning of the end
The starting of hurt part 1
part 2
living in his world - part 3
part -4
Part-5
Part-6
The end of the past and a bitter present
Leap introduction
Destiny
Shivomru united
Encounter
Forgive me
Plans
Who is gauri
Fake story
Dilemmas
Om's birthday
Ugly accusations
Choosing
Blackmailed
It hurts
Perfect plans -1
Perfect plans-2
Oms tauntrums
Gauris doubts-1
Gauris doubts-2
Acceptance
Gauris intentions-1
Gauris intentions-2
Oms anger
Om's Care
Shivaays anger
Intoductions of gaurikas kids
Teasing
Last chapters -1
Last chapters -2( om's heartbroken)
last chapters - The end

Changing you

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By Venomika


Om: I don't even have the right to seek your forgiveness Gauri

Not once or twice

Every time I hurt you and you just take it

Why didn't you tell me all this

I would have not supported you in giving our child away

But you could have just told me your circumstances 

Gauri: I'm sorry Omkaraji

But even you hid the fact about this twinkle

Who is she anyway?

What is this drama?

Om: I will explain it to you Gauri

But please promise that you will not leave me

And don't tell  shivaay anything

Gauri: what happened to shivaay bhaiyya?

Omkaraji please tell me

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Omika pov

After successfully  irritating that twinkle

She left the house but she threatened to come back soon and claim my dad

Such a wimp

She doesn't know what she is talking about

I opened the door of my room where I locked my parents

I just hope that everything is alright with them

I saw my mom crying on my dad and they were hugging each other emotionally

Omika: what's happening here?

Om: nothing !

Your mom is sad 

Thinking about her wrinkles 

gauri: Omkaraji!!

Om: really Gauri you need to do something

Why don't you apply creams?

Look at me I'm looking younger than you

Omika: are you both for real?

What are you guys doing?

Did you plan something to get rid of that twinkle

Om: we actually planned to get rid of you

Omika: what?

Gauri: Omi we love you a lot 

But you have to help us

Omika: what??

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Twinkle pov

I saw that gauri just going away from omkara

They were not even trying to speak to each other

I was happy that even when they were alone

They couldn't solve their misunderstandings 

I was walking towards the oms room

Only to find those children arguing with each other

Rathan: really Omi?

Did mom really slap you

Omika: yes !

She said it was all because of me

That mom had to marry dad

If I was not alive then she would have been happy with her life 

Ashi: don't cry omi di

I will go and hit mom

Omika: ashi shut up

Omika pov

This ashi does overacting

Form where did she get this acting from?

Omika: no ashi

It's alright 

It was not moms mistake 

It was mine, I shouldn't have done that

If they don't want to live togeather it's ok

I will not force them anymore

Let dad remarry that twinkle

We must support her

Rathan: if you think so

Then we will help dad di

Twinkle: at last you children have some sense

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Gauri : Omkaraji

Where are you taking me

Om: just listen to me

Gauri : Omkaraji

Kids are alone with that kamini

If anything happens to them ! I will not stay quiet

Om: when was the last time we were in a car Gauri

Without kids, without anyone bothering

Gauri: Omkaraji

I'm going crazy here thinking about our children

And you are just avoiding the topic

Why?

Om: Gauri are you hungry

Les eat here

Gauri : Omkaraji

Please tell me something

What are you doing

Om: relax Gauri

I already sent someone who will protect our kids

From everyone

Gauri: bug Omkaraji

We must be their in that house

Protecting our kids

Om: don't worry about that gauri

You need to change yourself for bigger plans

Gauri: what do you mean bigger plans Omkaraji

Om: get down Gauri

You are going through a makeover

Gauri: make over ?

What the hell is that?

Om: you will know about it

Come on in

Gauri : Omkaraji what?

Om pov

I took her into a saloon and asked them to change my wife into a different person

Gauri: Omkaraji is this nessasary?

Om: for our plan part 2

This is nessasary

Gauri : but Omkaraji!!

They are pulling my hair

Om: don't worry everything will be alright

Just stay still

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Twinkle: you mean your dad loves these behnji type look

Omika: yup

The more you change like my mom

The more he will come close to you

Twinkle: but that's not my style

Omika: then even dad will not choose you

Twinkle : but !

Omika: I really want you to be my mother

Can you please change like her

Rathan: please kamini.. sorry twinkle 

Twinkle : ok I will try

to be continued********************************************************************

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