OMGOSH I CNAT BLEIFE THAT HIS HAS ONLY BEEN UP FOR A DAY AND YORU ALREDDY FMALING!1!11!1! :( STOP! JUSES MIGHT LIKE GAT PPPL NOW BUT THAT DOENT MEAN EH LIKKS FLAMMERS
Why does this girl get to speak for Jesus? He loves each and every one of us and guides us, and xdarkrosesx is definitely someone who needs some guidance.
"Are you" said BrakenFur.
"WHY WONT QNYONE BELIVE ME" said starGleam and she ran uot of the cmap.
Girl, one cat questioned you, and you threw a fit. Calm down!
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angry!
HOW cloud BrakinFor noy belivfe her after!11!11 And atfer averythign she done as a amaxing kit!She went to Satinclam and it wsa in a clerring just past the thunderclan boarder. She saw all the catd who were in Satnclan and there were..... CXLOUDTAIL AND MOUTHWING!11!1!11!1111
Mouthwing😂
"LakePaw and RedFur dd you tell FlameOelt and NightRani that they couls come back now?" said Stargleam?
"no were all stlill athletes" StarGleam was bout to go home when realized soethinf. There cats were crepping towerd her!11!1!
Athletes? What sports do you play?
"What are youo doing!1!" said she. SatinClaw wallked up to her now he was earing purple nail pollish and three was a blackk stirpe on his head. "We cnat' let you left Stargleam he said. you know to muchgt."
What is the deal with the nail polish and why is it such an important detail??
HOlyLeaf kumped out form the shadows and turhned into a BOBCAT!1!1!
Gosh, she just never goes away, does she?
Bubcat HullyLeaf ran at StarGleam! She hit StarGleam!1!1 Satinclaw came up 2 and hestared to claw her.
But when thet clawed her stomich somtehgn inside of StarGleam hurted!1!1!1!11! IT WAS A KIT111! STARGLEAM COULD FELL HER KITS PAN!
Her kit has a pan? Can I hit Starpaw with it?
she was,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, PREGGANT.
What?? Who's the father?
"IIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEE !1!" SIAD STARGLEAM.
Here are her exact words: "AYEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! ONE!!!"
AUTHROS NTOE OMG JAZZY POSTED THIS CHPTAE WITHOU T ME SAYIGN SHE OULCD. IM SORRY I DIDNT GET TO ETID TI MROE! I DIDNT KNOW JAZZ COULD USE MY COUTN
I still can't believe that this writer actually edits this story. I can't imagine how horrible it would be without editing!