Manan SS: Love @ Coaching Cla...

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Part - 01
Chapter - 2
Chapter - 03
Chapter - 4
Chapter - 05
Birthday Gift
Chapter - 06
Chapter - 7
Chapter - 08
1 K
Chapter - 09
Chapter - 11
Chapter ~ 12
Chapter - 13
Chapter - 14
Decided
Ch - 15
Ch - 16
Sneak Peek (Pappu finds about Manik)
Ch- 17

Chapter - 10

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By code_blooded

Initially I was highly disappointed by the response on the last part but then I realised that maybe you all died of laughing before liking or commenting 😅😅

Inline comments are love 😘😘
And long comments is my crush 😋
Please do comment if I am successful in making you laugh.

We finally reached the beautiful park. Rishu and Muku went to buy the tickets while I am trying to fit in Chandu's and Navya's selfies 😎😘

Meanwhile...

D- Manik yr.... Yesterday I had a breakup.

M- Congratulations dude......Look we all are also single.... Enjoy your life.

D- Hmm.... I want to forget her.

M- Okay....Do one thing....Take ₹40000 loan when you will have ₹400 interest everyday....You will definitely forget her.

D- Sorry....My mistake. I asked the wrong person.

M- See..... Getting into relationship may seem like a good idea but so was getting on the Titanic and look what happened there.

D- Got it but I am bored.

C- No you are Dhruv.

D- By the way aaj aunty tujhe chappal se kyu marr rhi thi??

C- Wo mom nhi curd jamane ko kha tha.....

M- So??

C- When I asked kitna jamana hai...........She said SAHARA JAMANA

D- Haseeno ka Deewana.....💁💁

C- I too started singing.......Phir kya tha...... Flying chappal landed on me.

M- Aunty kaise jheelti h tujhe......May God give her all the strength.

A- Yaar, this is really boring.

M- Cabir where are you going??

C- Follow me babes.

Cabir went to a very much in love, romancing couple.

C- Di Namaste. Remember me. I am Mishra ji's son. You are that uncle's daughter......What was his name??
Wait a minute........I will call dad and ask.

The couple ran away..... muttering abuses.

M- You know tu abhi mar sakta tha. They could have killed you.

C- But I am still dashing and alive. This is called dare. It requires courage.

M- Are you trying to say that I am not courageous??

C- Courage- The Cowardly Dog......Dekhne se koi courageous nhi ho jaata.

M- You are challenging me.

C- Come then prove it.

M- Shoot.

Back to the girls.....

Mu- Got the tickets....Lets go in. Get in a line starting with Nandu and Chandu.

Ch- Why us??

R- Coz we got children's tickets for you both and adult for us three.

N- What the hell ?? You idiots. We will be caught. Children's tickets are for below 10.

Mu- Arre there was a difference of ₹10 in the price. You two looks kids.

R- I will be at the end of the line with the tickets. Walk fast and straight inside.

N- If we are caught....I will complaint dad.

Back to Daredevils....

C- Okay whosoever enters the park next you have to flirt with that girl till the time she leaves the park.

M- Done

A- Line marne k to bahut saare tarike hai but tu kya apnaega.

M- Aap hi gyaan de.

A- Basically teen tarike hote h.....
1. Pen se
2. Pencil se
3. Marker se.

C- Hasna tha???? Dekh aa gayi.

D- I have seen her somewhere.

Thankfully they entered without being caught due to the extra alertness of the gaurds.

Since Nandini was the first one to enter, Manik was full focused on her.

M- I can something really beautiful in your eyes.

N- Are you talking to me 😐😐

M- Yup....In your eyes.

N- What??

M- My reflection.

N- Crazy

A- Doll....Wow yr tu to kitni kam moti ho gae h.

N- Abhi you know......A recent study shows that women who carry a little extra weight lives a little longer than then the man who mention it.

A- Still.....Fatty you are fat.

N- Look actually, basically, technically, mentally, mathematically and finally I am cute.
You idiot, instead of noticing me..... Don't you think you should propose someone else??

A- Well I finally proposed her but.....She said she want some time and distance.

N- Mukti.....Time and distance seriously?? Velocity nikalna h kya??

M- Btw aapne apna naam nhi bataya??

N- Kyu aap Facebook ho kya....Jo pura naam batana compulsory h.

M- No problem....Pta chal jaega.

N- Mukti, where has Rishu gone??

Mu- Dad called. He will be back soon.

C- Come let's go to cafeteria.

N- No thanks, we are not joining you all.

Navya and Mukti- No Nandini.....Why not?? We are coming.

M- Please walk carefully.

N- So much care??

M- I don't want you to fall for anyone else other than me.

N- Cheesy Mr. Malhotra.

M- So you know me?? Lemme guess a fan girl.

N- Nah.... Fortunately I have a good taste.

M- Lemme tell you that you are really cute but you seems not fit.

N- Why so??

M- Because you have a deficiency of vitamin ME.

Nandini moved to the restaurant leaving Abhi and Manik.

M- Yaar ye to mujhe esse ignore kr rahi h jaise hum boards time probability chapter ko karte hain.

They to joined everyone.

Done... Dekho how good I am. I updated finally.....😅😅
Hope you guys enjoyed.
I don't know what I have written.
Please be kind enough to shower your love through comments and humanity through votes.

Though the response was low but thanks for your immense love to all those who bothered to comment and even message me to update 😘😘
Cutieerabbit ZingYau 😍😍😘😘

So a promo especially for you all..

M- Do you like me??

N- No as I said I have a good taste.

M- Ooh.

N- But unfortunately you didn't ask if I love you 😐

M- What?? Do you love me??

How was the update??
Liked this Manik??
Any guesses what will be Rishabh's reactions seeing Manik that too flirting with her sister.

Love you all 😄

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