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Nandini:- aap!! Manik:- tum!! Nandini:- aap mera picha kar rhe ho na...mujhe laga hi tha. sundar ladki dekhi... 更多

Introduction.
Anjana~Anjani
Miley jab hum tum
Hum_Tum
Hum_Kisi_Se_Kum_Nhi
Jumma_Chumma_De_De
Gayi_Bhais_Pani_Me
Misunderstanding Begins
Relation~o~Logic
Chapter 10
Chapter:- 11
Past Revealed
Flashback [Part B]
Chapter13
Chapter:-14
Chapter:-15
Chapter:- 16
Chapter 17[Roka Ceremony]
Pyar~Ka~Pathshala
Kya~Tum~Mujhse~Dosti~Karogi
Chapter:- 20
IGNORANCE
Chapter:-22
I TRUST YOU
I Love Nandini
Manali Trip
Ishq Ka Raita
Chapter:-27
{MaNan} Ch:-28
Scared To Loose You
Chapter:-30
Manan Promise
Rest In Peace Bhanumati
Sangeet Night
Mehendi & Haldi
MaNan~Ki~Shadi
My Shimmer Queen
❤️Humesha Forever❤️
Have To Let Her Go
A Kiss In The Rain
Manan Is Over
6 Din Ladki In
Day 1 {Biwi Manao Biwi Patao}
Day 2 { *Ab hoga dangal!! *}
Day 3 [Plan Flop But Still Have Hope]
Day 4 {Reality Of My Beautiful Dream}
Day 5 [Is This The End Of Us?]
Day 6 Sab Ho Gya Fix.
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Epilogue

Jab They Met.

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Location:-Malhotra mansion

T:-(shouting exitedly)maa, janvi, bhabi... kaha h sab bhai...

Da:-oyy itta chilla kyu raha h gale phad phad k...

Nyo:-kya hua devar ji itna khush kyu h...

T:-arrey khush hone ki baat h to khush to hounga hi na...

Manik smile n noded his head in disbelief ..

Ja:-offo tej... Itna suspense kyu create kar rhe ho... Bataiye na kya baat h..

Ca:-hey everyone... (Pecking dadi's cheek)hy beautiful... Kya baat h dad bade khush lag rhe ho aap..

D:-yo guys... Ohho kya baat h kuch discussion chal rhi h kya...

Da:-oye khotte thoda chup karega... Haa tej tu kuch bata rha tha na.. Bol..

Tej was again going to say something tabhi mukti, aliya n abhimanyu come...

[MukBhi= Mukti n Abhimanyu]

MukhBhi n alya (together):-hey everyone...

Abhimanyu n alya touched elder's leg as giving them respect ...

T:-or koyi reh gya kya...

Abhi:-or koyi reh gya se matlab??

Da:-Tej tu wo sab chor or bata kya baat h...

T:-(clearing his throat)Manik ne hame wo singhaniya wala deal hashil kar k di h....

All younster cheered up with a joy... Boys came forward n hug manik one by one...

Da:-mennu pata tha... Mannu puttar tune hamara sar garv se ucha gar diya... Arrey bhai koyi muh mitha to karawo..

Ma(irritatingly):-common guys... N dadi aap log itna kyu khush ho rhe jaise ki ye mene pehli deal hashil kari ho ...

Da:-puttar tu pehli baar hashil kare ya akhri baar deal hashil kare.. Par puttar tu nhi janta ki ye mere liye kitti badi baat h.. tere dadaji agar ask zinda hote to bahut khush hote...

By hearing name of dadaji Raj who was silent spectator went to his room...
Manik was hurt by this behaviour of his dad...but nothing can be done now...

Nyo(coming towards manik n caressing his head):- m proud of you beta... Bhagwaan tujhe har mod pe successful kare...

Manik smiled little as he know that his mother understand his inner turmoil...

Ja:-congrats beta... God bless u...

Ma:-thank u everyone...

D(nudging manik[immitating amitabh bacchan ji]):- khush to bahut hoge aaj tum ..haye...

Manik lightly punch dhruv's stomach n went to his room...

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Location:-NavNi ashiyana
Time:-6:45 pm

Nav:-nandu tu ne apni scooter thik karne k liye di ki nhi...

Nan:-haa wo me jaa hi rhi thi... Accha chal me chalti hu..

Nav(shouting from hall):-jaldi ana late mat hona..

Nandu went to nearby garrage for repairing her bhanumati(scooter)..

By coming back home she heard some noise from the road side bushes..
1st she ignores it n start walking humming some random song but again she hear some kind of noise n little movement in the bushes... She firstly got scared but by gathering courage she comes near the bushes n BHOWWWW

Nan:-(screaming) Ayapppaa bhooottt bachaooo....

[Awwwyii😘😘😍😍 ....I love pugs ..🐶.. ]

She first got startled n then come closer to pug ..

Nan:-Ayappa...ye kiska pilla h[puppy]...

Nan to pug:-hy pilla... Aapko akele yaha kisne chora...

Pug:-bhowww

Nan:-ohh sorry me v na paglo ki tarah sawaal puch rhi hu..
Zara dekhu to kahi iska owner dikh rha h ki nhi... (Looking here n there)
Arrey yaha to koyi v nhi h... Kya karu ... Isse yaha akela v nhi chor sakti... (After deciding alot) ek kaam karti hu isse apne sath hi le chalti hu...

Taking pug she went home...

TING TONG TING TONG TING TONG TING TONG.... (repeatedly )

Nav:-arrey aa rhi hu bhai... Ab kya doorbell hi tod doge...

(Opening the door)

Nav:-nandu pagal ho gyi h kya aise koyi doorbell bajata h...

Nadini shows her battishi 😀...

Nav:-ye battishi kya dikha rhi h or tu piche kya chupa rhi h... Dikha mujhe... Jarur kuch utpatang chij hoga... Dikha zara..

Tabhi BHOWWW(pug jumps out of the hold of nandu n navya jumps out in the fear)

Nav:-(screaming) matarani bachao... Nandu kaha se pakar k layi h tu isse.

Nan:-navya tu itta uchal kyu rhi h.. Chotu sa pilla hi to h... Dekh kitna bhola lag rha h ...

Nav:-chota -bhola!! Jab katega na tab niklega tera chota n bhola...

Nan:-arrey aise kese katega... Accha tu dekh .. (Caressing pug's head) kuch kiya... Nhi na... Tu na bass awyii chillati rehti h... Tu v kar k dekh...

Navya comes forward n touch pug's head with terribly shaking hand...

Nan:-kuch kiya... Nhi na... Tu khamakha darti rehti h

Nav:-kitta pyara h ye... Tujhe kaha se mila yeh ...

Nan:-wo mujhe ye sadak k kinare me mila.... Bechara akela tha isiliye apne sath le ayi..

Nav:-wo sab to thik h but ab ye hamare sath rahega to iska kuch naam to rakhna parega na... To kya naam rakhe isska

Nan(tapping her chin thinking deeply n replies after sometime):- Ghungroo naam kesa rahega...

Nav(confusingly):-Ghungroo?? Ye kesa naam h nandu....

Nan:-arrey bagut soch samajh k naam bol rhi hu... Or iske piche v logic h

Nav:-logic?? Kesa logic

Nan:-ye kya h??

Nav:- kutta

Nan:-arrey pagal iss kutte ka english me konsa breed h

Nav(after thinking):-umm Pug...

Nan :-or mene kya naam bataya

Nav:-Ghungroo..

Nan:-logic samjhi ya nhi

Nav:-ye pug ka ghungroo se kya logic banta h nandu.. Mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa rha h

Nan:-arrey buddhu... Tune Amitabh ji ka wo gana nhi suna
Ke PUG GUNGROO bandh mira nachi thi...

Nav:-(slapping her forehead lightly n nodded in disbelief):- tera kuch nhi ho sakta ...

Nan to pug:- to pilla ji aaj se aapka new naam ghungroo... Kesa laga aapko?? Pasand aya??

Ghungroo:-bhoww bhoww

Nan(smiling brightly):-dekha ghungroo ko uska naam pasand aya... Yayy..

Navya smiled looking her childish behaviour...

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Location:- malhotra mansion
Dinning hall
Time:9 pm

Everyone was having there dinner

Ma:-umm dadi wo singhaniya h na unhone hum sab ko invite kiya h..unki beti h Nayra uska kal birthday party h...to aap sab kal chalenge na

Da:-arrey bhai Singhaniya sahab ne bulaya h to jana to banta h...kyu baccho...

D:-(hearing Nayra's name):- kya?? Mr.Singhaniya ki beti v h...(wishpering slowly to manik) bhaiya plzz meri usse setting karao n...pllzz😁

Ma( sarcastically) :-dhruv beta...aap jo imaginary halwa bana rhe h na usme aap chini k bajay namak mila rhe h... FYI nayra ek 13 years ki ladki h...(raising his eyebrow)to kya me apki setting ek bacchi k sath karau??

D(getting sad):-kya bhaiya...sara halwa kheer kheer kar diya😔

Ca:-ye tum log kya kheer halwa k bare me baat kar rhe ho...dessert me to gulab jamun h...

Mu:-uff itta dishes yha pada hua h fir v aap logo ka mann nhi bharta...bhukkad kahi k..

Tej(getting up from his chair):-chalo bhai mera to ho gya..to final h na sab chal rhe ho na kal shinghaniya's k party me...

Everyone except elders n manik:-yesshhh

D:-chalo mera v ho gya...gud n8 baccho...

Every one:-gudn8
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Scene:- Raj & Nyonika's Room

Raj was standing near the window n was thinking something deeply

Raj(self talk):- me janta hu manik...mere ye behaviour se tumhe bahut hurt feel ho rha h...but I can't do anything about this...this distance btween us is created by u...but beta aaj me ye express nhi kar sakta ki me kitna khush hu...aaj tumne mera sar garv se fir ucha kar diya...

Nyo who came to thr room listened all his self talk as he was talking loudly..

R:-me janta hu manik ki tumhe tumhari uss din ki kahi huyi baat pe abhi v pachtawa h...but I can't do anything

[I will show it later why thr is difference between manik n raj ...ab thoda suspence create karna to banta h😝...in previous chapter part A i had shown raj talking to manik , but let me clear it that they only talk about business things ...]

Nyo:-jab aapko pata h ki manik ko apni kiye ki pachtawa h to maaf kyu nhi kar dete aap usko raj...

R:-nyo tum!!!

Nyo:-ha raj...mene apki sari baat sunli...to batayiye...kyu nhi maaf karna chahte h aap manik ko...

R:-nyo mujhe nind aa rhi h...kya hum kal baat kar sakte h...

Nyo:-KAL KAL KAL.....mujhe samajh nhi ata ki aap iss baat ko humesha kyu taal dete h...

R:-nyo plzz...I don't want to discuss anything now...the topic is over

Nyo:-but ra...

R:-bol diya to bass...bol diya...so jao nyo...

Nyo(self talk):-pata nhi kab in dono ki duriya kum hongi...

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Next morning
Location :- malhotra mansion
Time:-9 am

(Manik's dress)

Ma:-gud morning everyone (pecking dadi's cheek)gud morning dadi..(hugging nyo)gud morning maa

Everyone excepy raj:-gud morning

After having thr breakfast n discussing some business things they alk left for thr work n ladies got busy in thr daily work...

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Navni ashyana
Time:-9:20 am

Navya's outfit

Nav:-nandu or kitni derr yaar...time ho rha h...hume aaj hi malhotra mansion pahuchna h....yaar ghungroo teri nandu to aise tyaar ho rhi h jaise wo uske sasural jaa rhi h...

Ghungroo:-bhoww bhoww..

Nandini's outfit

Nan:-tum log mere pit piche burayi kar rhe ho na...😒 gin gin k badla lungi...

Nav:-chal ab....late ho rha h...

NavNi:-bye ghungroo....

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Location:- Malhotras Mansion

Nan:-ayiyoooooo......navuuuuu....kya ghar h....chee isko ghar nhi mahal bolna chahiye..

Nav:-haa yar.... matarani hum yaha kaam karenge..

Nan:-yha to meri selfie v acchi ayegi....h na

Nav:-oyy selfie queen...under chal late ho rha h...

They both entered inside malhotra mansion...

Servant:-ji aapko kisse milna h madam

Nav:-bhaiya ji wo hame dadiji se milna h....actually unhone hume milne bulaya tha...

Servant:-accha aap bethiye me madam ko bula k ata hu...

NavNi nodded their head...

Nandini was so curious to take her selfie that she went to one corner n started her selfie session making funny faces...

Nan(shouting):- ayiyyooo navu kitna mast selfie aya h mera...dekh

Nav:-matarani(slapping her forehead lightly)...nandu tu idhar aa...

Navya was walking toward nandini but in middle she collided with someone...she closed her eyes in fear but she realised that she was safe...than she opened her eyes slowly to she cabir holding her securely in his arm...they were lost in each other eyes...[BG music]

Tujhe dekha to yeh jana sanam
Pyar hota hai deewana sanam
Tujhe dekha to yeh jana sanam

Tujhe dekha to yeh jana sanam
Pyar hota hai deewana sanam
Tujhe dekha to yeh jana sanam
Pyar hota hai deewana sanam
Ab yahan se kahan jaayein hum
Teri baahon mein mar jaayein hum

They were so lost in each other that they forgot their surroundings...by now dadi also came down n witness their cute sa eyelock...
Dadi coughed for breaking their eyelock
Cabir n navya got startled n looked here there.

Ca:-(stammering)wo dadi...wo me...wo mujhe kuch kaam h...me jata hu...

Da(smilingly):-haa haa jaa...mene thode na roka h...

Cabir look toward navya n smiled before going...n navya was full tomato by now...
Nandu was giving looks like kuch to locha h...

Da:-aao baccho...me tumhi log ka intezaar kar rhi thi...

NavNi:-namaste dadi

Da:-jeete raho puttaro...chalo hum ander bethte h...

Trio settled in the hall...

Da:-to baccho ab to ye tay h ki tum hamare ghar ki organisers ho...

NavNi nodded their head

Da:-to me chahti hu ki tum dono bass funvtions n parties ko hi nhi organise karogi...

NavNi got confused by dadi's word..

Da:-mera matlab h ki...dekho baccho ye hamara ghar h or yha pe har roz kuch na kuch to hota hi rehta h...to me chahti hu ki tum dono hamare ghar k time table, sab ka schedule maintain kar k rakho...

Nan:-par dadi ye hamara kaam nhi h...hum to..

Da:-me janti hu puttar...magar hamare ghar me sab kaam kazi log h(working people)...jaise tum janti ho ki hamara khud ka business h to ghar k mard(men) to business handel karne me busy rehte h or ghar ki aurte (ladies) social works me busy rehte h...or rahi me...me to ab buddhi ho chali or mujhe na hi kuch thik se hota h na hi me cheeje thik se yaad rakh pati hu...isiliye me chahti hu ki tum dono sabke matlab pure ghar k din bhar ki schedule maintain karo...karoge na puttar...

Nav:-ji dadi hum tayaar b...but humari v kuch maange h...

Da:-bolo putaar.....

Nan:-hum chahte h ki bhale hum aapke organisor ho magar agar hume koyi v order milta h organise karne ka to hum usse karna chahenge...aapko koyi problem to nhi hogi na isse...

Da:-arrey puttar isme dikkat ki kya baat h...tum log alag se kuch v kar sakte ho....

Nav:-to hume apki offer manjur h...

D:-ye to badi acchi baat ho gyi....chalo accha h...to ek kaam karti hu...me kisi se bol kar sabki daily schedule ki list bana k dilwa deti hu...jaise kiski kya pasand h napasand h,kisko kya khana accha lagta h etc...

NavNi nodded thr head in agreement...

By some more discussion dadi gave schedule to NavNi ...after some more chit chat they were ready to go home...

They start moving but tabhi dadi call nandini

Da:-nandini puttar sunn...

Nan:-ji dadi....

Da:-wo mujhe tujjse akele me baat karna h...

Nandini nodded n said to navya

Nan:-navu sunn tu aage chal me ek min me ayi...

Navya nodded her head...

Nandini weny to dadi n said:-haa dadi boliye...

Da:-puttar me janti hu ki ye thoda jaldi h...lekin kya tumhe v wo hi lagta h jo mujhe lagta h...

Nan(confusingly):-matlab??me samjhi nhi dadi...

Da:-arrey cabir or navya k bich me...

Nan:-ye cabir kon h??

Da:-arrey wo hi jisne navya ko bachaya...

Nan:-...ooo...accha...dadi mujhe aisa to kuch laga nhi magar me itna bol sakti hu ki sayad future me kuch baat ban jaye kyuki jis tarah se navu blush kar thi thi na ussey to mujhe kuch locha lag rha h...

Da:-to kya bolti h tu...unki baat aage badhaye...

Nan:-yess dadi I m in ....

Dadi n nandu(together):-Mission CaVya ..

Nan:-accha dadi ab me chalti hu...

Da:-thik h puttar kal time se aa jana..

Both bid bye n nandu start walking n being engrossed in her cell she collided with some one n fall down ...

Nan:-ayiyoooo maar gyi....ayappa...

Nan looked upward in angry toward the person with whom she collided...n it was non other than our hero Manik....n they both shout eksath..

Nan:-aap!!!😨

Man:-tum???😓
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Precap:-manan arguement
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Author's note...
Haye pehli baar ittta likhi...mere exam me v itta nhi likhti me hehehe....
Anyways....guyz plz vote n comment...

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