okay everyone, so I'm not really liking the ugly turn my story has taken.
I don't want Jack to be such a pessimist and in the beginning I was hoping for more of a love triangle, so there's going to be some MAJOR construction of this story going on. I plea that you don't get too frustrated with me, but I just don't want my characters to be the way they've turned out. As the chapters are re-published, I beg that you go back and read them for your sake so that the story makes sense STARTING WITH CH. 18 and I can continue writing happily, without being stuck in such a rut THANKS FOR READING!!!