Whoa, no need to bring drugs into this...
ok jazzie-kun pleas dont get mad at me cause your not in it yet. You'l apear soon dont worry.
I think she's better off not being in it, for her own sake...
StarKit wock up and sunlit was in the branches.
The sunlight was IN THE BRANCHES?? NO WAY!!!!
She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today.
Butter mom? You can't be serious
"Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today."
So important that you felt the need to repeat the word twice!!
"What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was.
Can anyone explain this verb to me?
"Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly.
This is either a lot of misspelled words, or I haven't gotten proper education on verbs and adverbs!
Today was the day she was an apprentice!
She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom.
Flicked what?
But her Mom cot up to her quick.
"Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said.
...WHAT?
StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different!
A usedto be? Is that a tribe apprentice that died?? Get it? Because tribe apprentices are called "to be's", so if they died they would be called... oh, forget it!
"StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the leg. He jumped down.
Apparently Firestar forgot the ceremony hadn't started yet.
"StarKit it s tome for you to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you."
Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!".
Firehert liked her shoulder.
Must be a pretty nice shoulder...
He whispered in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti."
Yes, yes, tea. It's a very nice beverage that Twolegs drink. Why are you stating that right now?
Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./
These aren't wolves. At least I don't think so...
Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod.
"Daughetr where very happy but he have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
StarPaw gasped. What does it mean?
lol I update fast dont i. REVEIW or ill hit over the head with a frying pan! XDD jk
...please don't