Dark (A Louis Tomlinson story...

By amandayork738

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To everyone who doesn't know Louis Tomlinson, they'd think he is sweet and funny, but to Amanda, he is intimi... More

Dark (A Louis Tomlinson story.)
Chapter 1- Cries
Chapter 2- The Knock
Chapter 3- Cuts
Chapter 4- Breakfast
Chapter 5- Curly
Chapter 6- The Boys
Chapter 7- Too Late
Chapter 8- The Car Ride
Chapter 9- Save Me?
Chapter 10- Finally Safe
Chapter 11- Pancakes
Chapter 12- Angry Louis
Chapter 13- Running
Chapter 14- Twenty Questions
Chapter 15- Did You Miss Me?
Chapter 16- Rain
Chapter 17- Fight
Chapter 18- Not Talking
Chapter 19- The News
Chapter 20- The Tears On My Cheeks
Chapter 21- Needed Ingredients
Chapter 23- Honey, I'm Home
Chapter 24- Any Last Words?
Chapter 25- I Told You I Would
Chapter 26- Another Knock
Chapter 27- Here They Come
Chapter 28- The Hospital
Chapter 29- Unexpected Visitors
Chapter 30- Deadly Thoughts
Chapter 31- A Little Talk
Chapter 32- Leaving?
Chapter 33- A New Face
Chapter 34- Love?
Chapter 35- Do I?
Chapter 36- Meet Joshie
Chapter 37- Stuck In Headlights
Chapter 38- A New Life
Chapter 39- Leave Her Alone
Chapter 40- You're Mine
Chapter 41- Bits And Pieces
Chapter 42- Wasn't So Bad
Chapter 43- Apologizing
Chapter 44 - Leaving The Hospital Shouldn't Be This Hard
Chapter 45- I Need You
Chapter 46- Panic
Chapter 47- Tattoos
Chapter 48- Instagram
Chapter 49- Sweatshirt
Chapter 50- I Missed You
Chapter 51- Not In The Mood
Chapter 52- Bowling And Pizza
Chapter 53- Coffee Shop
Authors Note
Chapter 54- Lost and Scared
Chapter 55- Telling
Chapter 56- A Different Side
Chapter 57- Bad Dream
Chapter 58- Thank You
Chapter 59- A Drop In The Ocean
Chapter 60- Long Time No See
Chapter 61- Is The Old Lou Back?
Chapter 62- Pain
Chapter 63- And The Truth Comes Out
Chapter 64- Night Out
Chapter 65- Chasing
Chapter 66- Home
Book 2??
Book 2!!

Chapter 22- The Crimson Blouse

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By amandayork738

AMANDA'S POV

A loud scream cut me off which was shortly followed by a loud gunshot. The piercing scream rang through my ears again as a loud thud sounded nearby. I gripped tighter onto Louis as I looked at the end of the aisle. The lady had fallen face down on the ground. A crimson liquid soaked the back of her blouse that was supposed to be white. The lady was coughing as tears streamed down he face uncontrollably. Each time she coughed a little bit of scarlet liquid escaped from her mouth.

'Just put her out of her misery'' I thought. Louis scooped me up and ran in the other direction away from the coughing lady. Another loud gunshot broke the quietness of the store causing the end of the coughs escaping from the lady. I screamed as tears started rolling down my face. I buried my head in Louis' shoulder as he ran. We just turned the corner of the aisle as I heard a chuckle coming from the end of the aisle where the lady was now dead. The chuckle was familiar, I knew I've heard it before. It suddenly hit me who had killed the lady and I started to cry even harder.

"Shit." Louis cursed under his breath as he ran.

"Hey! Don't let them get away!" I heard the man shout.

"Can I just shoot him?" The other voice asked.

"No, we need both of them alive." The first voice said.

I heard the clomping of two pairs of shoes hitting the tiled floor behind is. Louis couldn't run very fast while carrying me so I decided he couldn't carry me, I needed to run. I wiggled around in his grip but he just tightened his arms around me.

"Louis! Put me down!" I yelled.

"Why?" He asked looking down at me.

"We both can run, it'll be faster." I replied.

Louis carefully set me down on the ground. He took my hand as we started running side-by-side now. The sound of the shoes were getting louder and louder with each step. Each step scared me even more. If I wasn't holding Louis' hand I wouldn't be able to see anything. My vision was so blurry from the tears escaping my eyes. I felt something wrap around my waist and pull me backwards roughly causing me to let go of Louis' hand.

"Louis!" I screamed.

Zayn jumped on Louis as soon as he turned around to look at me. Zayn pinned Louis to the ground easily.

"Hello love, long time no see. Did you miss me?" Liam asked with a chuckle.

"Get away from me!" I hissed as if the words were acid on my tongue.

"Don't talk to me like that." He grumbled tightening his grip around my waist.

Zayn punched Louis is the face as Louis tried to get away from him. I watched as Zayn pulled out something from his back pocket. He pointed the gun at Louis and I screamed as tears rolled down my cheeks

"No! Don't shoot him!" I cried.

"He isn't going to shoot him dumbass." Liam mumbled behind me.

"Get up!" Zayn yelled at Louis who stood up.

Louis looked at me, his eyes wide and glossy like they were before. A small frown sat upon his face as his eyes lingered on me. Zayn turned Louis around but kept the gun pointed at his head. He pushed Louis out of the store and Liam pushed me behind them. Zayn pushed Louis in the back of his car before he got into the drivers seat and started the car. Liam tried pushing me into the back but I resisted.

"God dammit Amanda, get in the fucking car!" Liam yelled a he pushed me in the back.

Zayn drove away as soon as Liam got into the passenger seat. I fell into Louis' arms, I was terrified. Louis rubbed my back in an attempt to comfort me but it didn't really work. I cried into his shoulder as he mumbled comforting things into my hair softly. Whenever he said everything would be okay I started crying more. I knew that it wasn't going to be okay, we were both just kidnapped and they had a gun which they obviously weren't afraid to use. Louis quickly caught on that saying everything would be okay wasn't helping so he slowly stopped mumbling things to me but he continued rubbing my back.

We had been in the car for at least a half an hour when the car finally stopped. We were in the middle of nowhere, I didn't even know which town we were in anymore. Liam opened my door and he pulled me out of the car harshly.

"Hey! Don't handle her like that!" Louis yelled.

Zayn grabbed Louis and the two brought us inside the small house. The building wasn't even a house, it was more of a cabin that you would rent for a few days. It only had one floor which had four rooms. One room was the kitchen and dining room squished into a small area. The second room was a tiny bathroom with a small shower in the corner which didn't look too promising that it was clean. The third room was a decent sized bedroom but it only had one bed. The final room was rather small but it had a couch and that was it.

Zayn and Liam pushed us into the bedroom. They forced us to sit down in two wooden chairs. They started out by tying Louis to the chair which took them a long time considering Louis was kicking and trying to get away from them. When they had finally tied him up they moved to me. They started out by tying my feet to the legs of the chair so I couldn't move. A loud yelp escaped my lips as they tightened the rope around my ankle. A low growl just escaped Louis' mouth but the two ignored him. They typed my hands behind my back but this time I didn't yelp just to spare Louis from freaking out.

Zayn and Liam walked out of the room, closing the door behind him. I could hear then talking but the door muffled most of their words. Liam retuned to the bedroom about fifteen minutes after they left but this time he held something in his hand. The thing he was holing shimmered in the dim lighting of the room as he stepped closer. A wide smirk was spread across his face as he lifted the knife to my face causing Louis to start furiously trying to get out of the ropes that held him to the chair but it didn't work, he was still tied to the chair.

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