Naruto: My Unique System

By Cloew23

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Sakamoto Tatsuma found himself transmigrated as a war orphan in the world of Naruto, where he quickly realize... More

Chapter 1: First Friend
Chapter 2: Unique System
Chapter 3: Entrance Examination
Chapter 4: The Pair of Prodigies
Chapter 5: Sakumo's Challenge
Chapter 6: Secret Taijutsu·One Thousand Years of Death
Chapter 7: Minato's Envy and Goal
Chapter 8: First Class
Chapter 9: Noticeable Improvement
Chapter 10: Over Training And Exam
Chapter 11: Nara Clan's Ultimate Technique
Chapter 12: Tatsuma vs Uchiha
Chapter 13: Tatsuma vs Minato
Chapter 14: Narrow Victory
Chapter 15: Meeting Tsunade and Jiraiya
Chapter 16: The Problem with Curly Hair
Chapter 17: Learning From Jiraiya
Chapter 18: Ninjutsu Scrolls
Chapter 19: Copying Homework Proved Useful!
Chapter 20: The Deconstruction Learning Method of Ninjutsu
Chapter 21: Second Semester
Chapter 22: The significance of Invinting Someone to a meal
Chapter 23: The Nara's Unique Jutsu
Chapter 24: News of Transfer Student
Chapter 25: Panel Upgrade
Chapter 26: Tatsuma Never Breaks Character
Chapter 27: Mito's Advice
Chapter 28: When The Fat Cats Bite Back!
Chapter 29: Mito's Selective Memory
Chapter 30: Hitting three birds with one stone
Chapter 31: Pondering Early Graduation
Chapter 32: Reason For War
Chapter 33: Whirlpool Country's destruction
Chapter 34: Applying For Early Graduation
Chapter 35: Genin Exam Rules
Chapter 36: Tatsuma VS Kushina
Chapter 37: Why Are You Targeting Me?
Chapter 38: Using The Rules Against Orochimaru
Chapter 39: Orochimaru's Gaze!
Chapter 40: Tatsuma and Minato VS Orochimaru
Chapter 41: Reporting To The Hokage
Chapter 43: Chakra Attributes and First Mission
Chapter 44: Darkness of The Ninja World
Chapter 45:Nightclub
Chapter 46: Tatsuma Trolling Minato
Chapter 47: The Best Hunters Often Disguise Themselves as Prey
Chapter 48: The Longer the Foreplay, the Shorter the Main Act
Chapter 49: Fame Is Deadly For A Ninja
Chapter 50: Getting New Jutsus From Jiraiya
Chapter 51: 6 Months Time Skip
Chapter 52: Tsunade's Doubts
Chapter 53: Gambling With Tsunade
Chapter 54: Mission Details
Chapter 55: Unsaid Rule In Accepting Private Commissions
Chapter 56: Genuine Intentions, Cruel Outcomes
Chapter 57: Men's Romance
Chapter 58: Unique Beast With Unique Features...
Chapter 59: Mito's Amazing Seals
Chapter 60: I Never Cross Dress
Chapter 61: The Senju Clan Is Full Of Fat Sheep!
Chapter 62: New Training Schedule
Chapter 63: Kushina's Bias Unveiled
Chapter 64: Can You Even Pay?
Chapter 65: The Unfortunate Orochimaru
Chapter 66: Sparks Between Two Countries
Chapter 67: Jiraiya's Choice
Chapter 68: Last Minute Changes Are Never Appreciated
Chapter 69: Splitting The Gifts
Chapter 70: Summoning Contract
Chapter 71: Hidden Effects Of Space-Time Talent
Chapter 72: Sakumo's Training Notes
Chapter 73: Request To Join The Battlefield
Chapter 74: Mito's Gift!
Chapter 75: Single People Give The Best Advice
Chapter 76: Exceptional Background Grants Undeserved Positions
Chapter 77: Taking The Initiative
Chapter 78: Trust Your Instincts When You Sense Trouble
Chapter 79: First Kill And Rasengan
Chapter 80: Personal Unique Talent
Chapter 81: Declaring War
Chapter 82: Minato's Request
Chapter 83: Orochimaru's Wisdom
Chapter 84: Learning From Orochimaru
Chapter 85: Result Of Having Two Shameless Senseis
Chapter 86: Counter Attacking
Chapter 87: First Battlefield Experience
Chapter 88: Artful Explosion Trap
Chapter 89: Retreat And Goal
Chapter 90: Sore Throat...
Chapter 91: Small World Indeed
Chapter 92: Skyrocketing Strength!
Chapter 93: Unleashed Tatsuma!
Chapter 94: Strength Compensate Skills
Chapter 95: Only You Are Left
Chapter 96: Ample Harvest
Chapter 97: Overwhelming Hoshi
Chapter 98: Defeating Hoshi
Chapter 99: Uchiha On The Rescue
Chapter 100: Hiruzen's Shock
Chapter 101: Don't Say Anything That Isn't Conducive To Unity
Chapter 102: The Lives Of Grassroots Ninjas Matter Too
Chapter 103: Time For Recovery
Chapter 104: Hyuga's Gratitude
Chapter 105: Preparing To Rejoin The Battlefield
Chapter 106: Having Children Might Not Always Be A Blessing
Chapter 107: Discovery Through The System
Chapter 108: Intuition
Chapter 109: The Stains On A Bright Surface Can't Be Hidden
Chapter 110: Return And Rewards
Chapter 111: Memories With A Mourning Filter Are Unreliable
Chapter 112: Nawaki's Talent?
Chapter 113: The Strongest Genjutsu
Chapter 114: Babies Left And Right
Chapter 115: Sometimes People Don't Know How To Vent
Chapter 116: Famous Training Camp
Chapter 117: Helping a Brother
Chapter 118: Sensory Ninjutsu
Chapter 119: One Must Look Forward
Chapter 120: No Right Or Wrong
Chapter 121: Dirty Reputation
Chapter 122: Cunning Onoki
Chapter 123: System Update
Chapter 124: Devine Mind
Chapter 125: Two More Talents
Chapter 126: Fast Growth
Chapter 127: Side Effects
Chapter 128: Tobirama's Inheritance
Chapter 129: Before A Prank, One Must Be Prepared For The Consequences
Chapter 130: Negotiations In The Land Of Iron
Chapter 131: Don't Fail Meaninglessly, Fail For Success
Chapter 132: Those Who Keep Their Promises Are Valuable Everywhere
Chapter 133: Check Up
Chapter 134: Shikaku's Jutsu
Chapter 135: Chunin Exam
Chapter 136: Sensei's Selfishness
Chapter 137: Challenge

Chapter 42: Jonin Team Leader and Sensei

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When Jiraiya uttered, "I want to take them both as disciples," it revealed that he hadn't definitively decided to accept them as apprentices. However, if he declares that he "wished to take both of them as disciples," it signifies an inability on his part to take on apprentices.

Certainly, taking both of them as disciples appears to be a desire deeply rooted in Jiraiya's heart. Yet, the fact remains that fulfilling this desire poses a challenge for him.

According to Tatsuma's assessment, Minato is slated to become Jiraiya's disciple, but Tatsuma himself is an "unexpected" scenario. When there's only one prodigy, it's standard for Sarutobi Hiruzen to assign them to Jiraiya, who is more inclined to take on apprentices.

However, with the emergence of two exceptional talents, Sarutobi Hiruzen must now grapple with the challenge of not only avoiding a shortage but also ensuring a balanced distribution. Additionally, he faces the task of allocating among his three disciples.

Orochimaru, who supervised their Genin exam, explicitly conveyed to Tatsuma that he wouldn't be taking on both individuals as apprentices. Jiraiya, on the other hand, is unable to accept both due to the need to accommodate Tsunade.

This put Tatsuma in a quandary. What advantages would he derive from becoming Tsunade's disciple? In this realm, the mentor-disciple dynamic holds great significance. Simply being part of a Jonin team doesn't automatically establish one as a Jonin's apprentice. Generally, the connection between a Jonin Squad Captain and Genin team members is usually one of authority and subordination or, at most, mentorship.

It mirrors the future scenario with Team 7, where Kakashi leads as a Jonin, and the three members address him as "sensei," but Kakashi refrains from officially adopting them as disciples. The true mentors or masters of Team 7, the genuine senseis, are the Sannin: Jiraiya, Orochimaru, and Tsunade. This encapsulates the essence of the mentor-disciple relationship.

The mentor-disciple relationship isn't merely a symbol of status; it serves as the conduit for passing down the ninja way and exclusive techniques, with Orochimaru's adoption standing as a notable exception.

If Tatsuma were to become Tsunade's disciple, his status would be impeccable, even surpassing Minato Namikaze, who originally became Jiraiya's disciple. However, Tsunade's expertise, in super strength and medical skills, is not suitable for Tatsuma. Oddly enough, these are precisely Tsunade's strengths but are the areas where Tatsuma is least skilled, as he lacks any special talents and has no interest in pursuing the medical ninja path.

Hence, what Tsunade can essentially provide him is a layer of endorsement in terms of status. Contemplating this, Tatsuma cast a glance at Sarutobi Hiruzen, displaying a hint of comprehension. Sarutobi Hiruzen's intention was for Jiraiya to guide the two as Jonin.

In the future, regardless of who becomes Tsunade's disciple, there's no imperative for them to fully adopt Tsunade's ninja path and techniques. Jiraiya will carve the path forward for both, freeing Tsunade from the need to personally guide her disciples.

The identity of Tsunade's disciple becomes inconsequential; what both the mentor and disciple can exchange is a mutual acknowledgment. Tsunade's reputation can shield the development of her disciples, and as the disciples mature, they, in turn, contribute to enhancing their master's renown.

One person who might find themselves at a disadvantage is Jiraiya. However, considering the bond between Jiraiya and Tsunade, He may not be bothered by willingly shouldering the disadvantage.

Upon grasping this dynamic, Tatsuma couldn't help but break into a smile. Sarutobi Hiruzen, who had been attentively observing the duo, was reminded of Uzumaki Mito's commendations on Tatsuma's resemblance to Tobirama sensei.

If Uzumaki Mito had initially praised Tatsuma's decisiveness in facing enemies, now Tatsuma's displayed thoughtfulness and ability to perceive nuances undeniably mirrored those of the Second Hokage.

"Alright, it's time for your team to acquaint themselves as well. Jiraiya, take these two youngsters with you. If there are any issues, don't hesitate to seek me out," Sarutobi Hiruzen gestured with a wave of his hand. Jiraiya nodded, glanced at the duo, and casually remarked, "Come along little ones."

And with that, Jiraiya swiftly darted toward a nearby window. In the midst of Sarutobi Hiruzen's expression transitioning from delight to sudden annoyance, Jiraiya inadvertently shattered the window once more, executing a hasty escape.

Observing the abrupt change in Sarutobi Hiruzen's demeanor, Tatsuma and Minato exchanged glances before cautiously navigating over the broken window, following Jiraiya in his escape.

After traversing a substantial portion of the core area, Jiraiya finally came to a halt on the rooftop of a building. Turning to the two who effortlessly followed, he quipped, "Not bad. I thought having Genin-level skills would be impressive."

Indeed,

Certainly, Jiraiya didn't exert himself fully. It was almost leisurely for him, yet not something any Genin could easily match. Some recently promoted Chunin might even find it daunting. Nevertheless, Tatsuma and Minato effortlessly kept pace, not breaking a sweat. Minato, feeling a tad sheepish, offered a smile and scratched his head. Tatsuma then remarked, "If you had employed the Body Flicker Jutsu, given our skills, catching up would be quite the challenge."

Jiraiya acknowledged Tatsuma's praise with a silent nod, then casually leaned against a low wall. "Even though I'm already acquainted with you two, we still need to go through the formalities. Let's begin with self-introductions. I'll kick it off as the leading Jonin. I'm Jiraiya, a Konoha Jonin skilled in Ninjutsu, excluding Lightning Release. I have a penchant for literary creation and drawing inspiration. What I can't stand, or rather, absolutely detest, is Orochimaru and his vile snakes. My aspiration is to reshape the ninja world, or assist others in doing so. Now, it's your turn."

Minato nodded and started, "I'm Minato Namikaze, a Konoha Genin proficient in Ninja Tool Throwing and Taijutsu, although not quite at Tatsuma's level. My hobby is reading."

"Hmm, there's nothing that comes to mind that I particularly dislike at the moment. My dream is to become a Ninja recognized and trusted by everyone, just like Hokage-sama."

"Hokage, huh? It's a pretty common dream at your age," Jiraiya remarked, glancing at Tatsuma. Tatsuma nodded and stated, "I'm Sakamoto Tatsuma, a Konoha Genin. I specialize in the same areas as Minato, and our skills are pretty evenly matched. My hobby is defeating people I respect. I do have one thing I specifically dislike, though, and that's this unruly hair. My dream is to seek out and overcome all worthy challengers and, if possible, find a way to make my hair straight and silky."

"Quite a robust sense of competitiveness. I've got your basic information, but you didn't mention anything about what I taught you. How come, even after my Ninjutsu guidance, you still aren't proficient?" Jiraiya playfully questioned. Minato was about to explain but was halted by Jiraiya, who tousled his hair with his hand. Then Jiraiya continued, "From now on, you can call me Jiraiya sensei, or just sensei. Although our temporary team will disband, no matter which one of you becomes Tsunade's disciple, it won't change the fact that you are my students. Got it?"

Minato nodded, then caught on to something amiss. Tatsuma looked at Jiraiya in disbelief. Jiraiya, too, realized the oversight, scratched his head, and said, "Ahaha~ Oops, slipped my mind. Well, you'll have to go through it sooner or later. Now that you know, let's focus on what's most important for you at the moment – learning.

Mastering the techniques of a ninja and how to become a true ninja. Since you're already my students, I won't hold back. Unless, of course, you only possess Lightning Release chakra, I can teach you."

Jiraiya spoke with great confidence. Minato nodded; Tatsuma had informed him that each ninja possesses their own chakra attributes, one or more. However, neither of them was certain about their own chakra attributes due to the expense of chakra paper, which was beyond their budget. Jiraiya seemed prepared and produced a few sheets of paper, saying, "Next, let's test your chakra attributes."

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