Naruto: My Unique System

By Cloew23

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Sakamoto Tatsuma found himself transmigrated as a war orphan in the world of Naruto, where he quickly realize... More

Chapter 1: First Friend
Chapter 2: Unique System
Chapter 3: Entrance Examination
Chapter 4: The Pair of Prodigies
Chapter 5: Sakumo's Challenge
Chapter 6: Secret TaijutsuĀ·One Thousand Years of Death
Chapter 7: Minato's Envy and Goal
Chapter 8: First Class
Chapter 9: Noticeable Improvement
Chapter 10: Over Training And Exam
Chapter 11: Nara Clan's Ultimate Technique
Chapter 12: Tatsuma vs Uchiha
Chapter 13: Tatsuma vs Minato
Chapter 14: Narrow Victory
Chapter 15: Meeting Tsunade and Jiraiya
Chapter 16: The Problem with Curly Hair
Chapter 17: Learning From Jiraiya
Chapter 18: Ninjutsu Scrolls
Chapter 19: Copying Homework Proved Useful!
Chapter 20: The Deconstruction Learning Method of Ninjutsu
Chapter 21: Second Semester
Chapter 22: The significance of Invinting Someone to a meal
Chapter 23: The Nara's Unique Jutsu
Chapter 24: News of Transfer Student
Chapter 25: Panel Upgrade
Chapter 26: Tatsuma Never Breaks Character
Chapter 27: Mito's Advice
Chapter 28: When The Fat Cats Bite Back!
Chapter 29: Mito's Selective Memory
Chapter 30: Hitting three birds with one stone
Chapter 31: Pondering Early Graduation
Chapter 32: Reason For War
Chapter 33: Whirlpool Country's destruction
Chapter 34: Applying For Early Graduation
Chapter 35: Genin Exam Rules
Chapter 36: Tatsuma VS Kushina
Chapter 37: Why Are You Targeting Me?
Chapter 38: Using The Rules Against Orochimaru
Chapter 39: Orochimaru's Gaze!
Chapter 41: Reporting To The Hokage
Chapter 42: Jonin Team Leader and Sensei
Chapter 43: Chakra Attributes and First Mission
Chapter 44: Darkness of The Ninja World
Chapter 45:Nightclub
Chapter 46: Tatsuma Trolling Minato
Chapter 47: The Best Hunters Often Disguise Themselves as Prey
Chapter 48: The Longer the Foreplay, the Shorter the Main Act
Chapter 49: Fame Is Deadly For A Ninja
Chapter 50: Getting New Jutsus From Jiraiya
Chapter 51: 6 Months Time Skip
Chapter 52: Tsunade's Doubts
Chapter 53: Gambling With Tsunade
Chapter 54: Mission Details
Chapter 55: Unsaid Rule In Accepting Private Commissions
Chapter 56: Genuine Intentions, Cruel Outcomes
Chapter 57: Men's Romance
Chapter 58: Unique Beast With Unique Features...
Chapter 59: Mito's Amazing Seals
Chapter 60: I Never Cross Dress
Chapter 61: The Senju Clan Is Full Of Fat Sheep!
Chapter 62: New Training Schedule
Chapter 63: Kushina's Bias Unveiled
Chapter 64: Can You Even Pay?
Chapter 65: The Unfortunate Orochimaru
Chapter 66: Sparks Between Two Countries
Chapter 67: Jiraiya's Choice
Chapter 68: Last Minute Changes Are Never Appreciated
Chapter 69: Splitting The Gifts
Chapter 70: Summoning Contract
Chapter 71: Hidden Effects Of Space-Time Talent
Chapter 72: Sakumo's Training Notes
Chapter 73: Request To Join The Battlefield
Chapter 74: Mito's Gift!
Chapter 75: Single People Give The Best Advice
Chapter 76: Exceptional Background Grants Undeserved Positions
Chapter 77: Taking The Initiative
Chapter 78: Trust Your Instincts When You Sense Trouble
Chapter 79: First Kill And Rasengan
Chapter 80: Personal Unique Talent
Chapter 81: Declaring War
Chapter 82: Minato's Request
Chapter 83: Orochimaru's Wisdom
Chapter 84: Learning From Orochimaru
Chapter 85: Result Of Having Two Shameless Senseis
Chapter 86: Counter Attacking
Chapter 87: First Battlefield Experience
Chapter 88: Artful Explosion Trap
Chapter 89: Retreat And Goal
Chapter 90: Sore Throat...
Chapter 91: Small World Indeed
Chapter 92: Skyrocketing Strength!
Chapter 93: Unleashed Tatsuma!
Chapter 94: Strength Compensate Skills
Chapter 95: Only You Are Left
Chapter 96: Ample Harvest
Chapter 97: Overwhelming Hoshi
Chapter 98: Defeating Hoshi
Chapter 99: Uchiha On The Rescue
Chapter 100: Hiruzen's Shock
Chapter 101: Don't Say Anything That Isn't Conducive To Unity
Chapter 102: The Lives Of Grassroots Ninjas Matter Too
Chapter 103: Time For Recovery
Chapter 104: Hyuga's Gratitude
Chapter 105: Preparing To Rejoin The Battlefield
Chapter 106: Having Children Might Not Always Be A Blessing
Chapter 107: Discovery Through The System
Chapter 108: Intuition
Chapter 109: The Stains On A Bright Surface Can't Be Hidden
Chapter 110: Return And Rewards
Chapter 111: Memories With A Mourning Filter Are Unreliable
Chapter 112: Nawaki's Talent?
Chapter 113: The Strongest Genjutsu
Chapter 114: Babies Left And Right
Chapter 115: Sometimes People Don't Know How To Vent
Chapter 116: Famous Training Camp
Chapter 117: Helping a Brother
Chapter 118: Sensory Ninjutsu
Chapter 119: One Must Look Forward
Chapter 120: No Right Or Wrong
Chapter 121: Dirty Reputation
Chapter 122: Cunning Onoki
Chapter 123: System Update
Chapter 124: Devine Mind
Chapter 125: Two More Talents
Chapter 126: Fast Growth
Chapter 127: Side Effects
Chapter 128: Tobirama's Inheritance
Chapter 129: Before A Prank, One Must Be Prepared For The Consequences
Chapter 130: Negotiations In The Land Of Iron
Chapter 131: Don't Fail Meaninglessly, Fail For Success
Chapter 132: Those Who Keep Their Promises Are Valuable Everywhere
Chapter 133: Check Up
Chapter 134: Shikaku's Jutsu
Chapter 135: Chunin Exam
Chapter 136: Sensei's Selfishness
Chapter 137: Challenge
Chapter 138: Fighting Everyone!
Chapter 139: Some Persistently Pursue, While Others Begin To Seek Substitutes
Chapter 140: First Mission As Chunin
Chapter 141: Sometimes, Overthinking Can Hinder Living A Good Life
Chapter 142: Tenko's "Cute" Cousin
Chapter 143: Nawaki's Death Wish
Chapter 144: Danzo's Intrest
Chapter 145: Confrontation
Chapter 146: Network Healing
Chapter 147: Tatsuma's Smile
Chapter 148: Nono's Talent
Chapter 149: Taking The Blame Is An Innate Ability Of Every Subordinate.
Chapter 150: Never Let Your Guard Down
Chapter 151: Tatsuma's Strategy
Chapter 152: The Best Lie is Not One Spoken by Yourself
Chapter 153: Fruits Of Diligent Labor Are Not As Great As Playing Tricks
Chapter 154: Don't Let The Food Leave Your Sight
Chapter 155: Danzo's Greed
Chapter 156: Talent Can Grow In Hardship, But Hardship Does Not Create Talent.
Chapter 157: Hesitation Leads To Defeat
Chapter 158: If The Gift Is Refused, Don't Expect To Receive It Again
Chapter 159: Tsunade Attacks!
Chapter 160: Tsunade's Power
Chapter 161: Tatsuma's Trap
Chapter 162: Claiming +10000 Attributes!
Chapter 163: Wisdom Talent
Chapter 164: The Genius Tatsuma
Chapter 165: Beware Of Those Who Like To Praise Enemies
Chapter 166: Empty Houses Age Faster Than Those Often Disturbed
Chapter 167: The Diary Records Not Only Words
Chapter 168: Don't Stupidly Go For Direct Interviews
Chapter 169: Reaching A Compromise
Chapter 170: Tsunade's Gets Punished
Chapter 171: Exposing The Rasengan
Chapter 172: The Power Of Rasengan
Chapter 173: Dan's Sorrow
Chapter 174: Seals And Ninjutsu Talents!
Chapter 175: Race And Hokage's Summoning
Chapter 176: New Strategy
Chapter 177: Shameless Hokage
Chapter 178: Hiruzen's Rewards
Chapter 179: Mito's Intentions
Chapter 180: Time To End The War
Chapter 181: Provoking Hanzo
Chapter 182: Hanzo Vs The Sannin
Chapter 183: Injuring Hanzo
Chapter 184: Fight When It's Time To Fight, Run When It's Time To Run
Chapter 185: In the Face of Conflicting Interests, Any Debate Is Superfluous
Chapter 186: Even if you make mistakes, don't fall into self-destruction.
Chapter 187: Yahiko's Request
Chapter 188: Getting Close to Leaders Doesn't Mean High Positions
Chapter 189: Some experiences that others have, there's no need to verify them
Chapter 190: Children are not unaware of right and wrong
Chapter 191: This World Won't Spare Much Time for Sadness
Chapter 192: Anbu Assessment
Chapter 193: Mission With Hiruzen
Chapter 194: The Power Of Prime Hiruzen
Chapter 195: Leaders Always Like To Say: Making You Work Hard Is To Train You
Chapter 196: Youth Challenge
Chapter 197
Chapter 198: The Daimyo's Scary Intentions
Chapter 199: Every Riddler Longs To Meet A Solver
Chapter 200: When Boys And Girls Get Close, There's Always Annoying Teasing

Chapter 40: Tatsuma and Minato VS Orochimaru

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Sarutobi Atoma didn't reappear until close to noon. It was apparent that, in addition to guiding Kushina back, he had briefed the Hokage on the earlier events.

As Orochimaru cast a scrutinizing gaze at the duo, he dryly remarked, "Looks like your break time is done."

At this point, both individuals had replenished their chakra, yet their physical stamina hadn't fully rebounded. Minato was in relatively better shape, whereas Tatsuma grappled with more noticeable fatigue. Nevertheless, Orochimaru remained resolute, displaying no inclination to grant them the luxury of a nap before resuming the assessment.

The duo rose to their feet, discreetly edging a bit farther away from Orochimaru. While unaware of the specific nature of Orochimaru's assessment, the decision to increase the distance was a strategic move to allow for better reaction time—a prudent choice.

Observing their subtle maneuver, Orochimaru acknowledged their alertness. He lifted his hand, commencing the formation of hand seals. Noticing Orochimaru's deliberate pace, Tatsuma briefly brightened, entertaining the hopeful notion that Orochimaru might be taking it easy on them.

"Wind Release: Wind Cutter Technique!"

However, Tatsuma's optimism proved unfounded. The moment Orochimaru completed the hand seals, Tatsuma's keen eyes detected distortions in the space around Orochimaru. Witnessing this unfold, Tatsuma instinctively unleashed his own chakra outward.

Although he hadn't systematically mastered techniques for utilizing Sensory-type chakra, his innate Sensory talent enabled him to effortlessly discern changes in chakra within his surroundings.

Within Tatsuma's heightened sensory perception, several wind blades assailed them, with Minato, at that moment, maintaining his vigilance, oblivious to the impending danger.

Swiftly forming hand seals, Tatsuma mobilized chakra to his legs, activating the Body Flicker Jutsu instantaneously. Closing the gap, he maneuvered toward Minato, executing and threw him to the ground.

"Bang~"

"Boom boom~"

As the two descended to the ground, the positions they had previously occupied, along with the tree stumps and boulders behind them, all appeared as if they had been sliced through by invisible blades.

"Indeed, I didn't make a mistake. It is indeed a Sensory talent" Orochimaru remarked, observing the unfolding scene. Having witnessed Tatsuma's Sensory prowess in the recent clash with Kushina, the trial now confirmed it.

"Orochimaru-sama, as expected from you." Tatsuma replied with a grim look

Upon seeing the havoc caused by Orochimaru, Sarutobi Atoma became uneasy. However, as he began to speak, Orochimaru fixed his gaze on him, rendering him speechless. A calm expression curved Orochimaru's lips as he coldly uttered:

"Sarutobi Atoma, you are merely a witness. I am the examiner."

"Yes, Orochimaru-sama," Sarutobi Atoma reluctantly nodded, casting a concerned glance toward the two students who had narrowly avoided harm, hoping they could persevere.

Minato also grasped the gravity of the situation and whispered, "Thanks, Tatsuma. Are you okay?"

Tatsuma shook his head and replied, "Use chakra to sense changes around you, Wind Release isn't as visually apparent as other jutsu; you need to observe more carefully."

Minato nodded, saying, "I understand."

Although the exchange between the two was brief, it presented Orochimaru with ample opportunities to launch multiple attacks. Surprisingly, he remained motionless, observing the two with keen interest.

As the two students rose from the ground, their vigilance remained heightened, particularly Minato. Following Tatsuma's lead, he began to release his chakra outward.

Orochimaru found this intriguing. Could it be that Minato also possessed Sensory talent? It was worth noting that not everyone had this innate ability, and sensing changes in the surrounding chakra by overflowing one's own chakra was a skill not every ninja possessed.

Eager to test this possibility, Orochimaru leisurely formed hand seals once again, unleashing the Wind Cutter Technique.

Witnessing the sequence of hand seals, the two immediately tensed up. The moment Orochimaru completed the hand seals, Tatsuma and Minato simultaneously activated the Seal of Confrontation. With both of them attuned to each other's actions, there was no need for hand seals in executing the Body Flicker Jutsu.

"Boom boom~"

The two rolled somewhat awkwardly, successfully dodging the slicing wind blades. Orochimaru raised an eyebrow; it seemed Minato also possessed such talent. Truly remarkable.

"Now, let's talk about the conditions for passing the assessment."

Orochimaru's smile reappeared, and as his words were uttered, Tatsuma and Minato suddenly realized that Orochimaru hadn't even explained the content of the assessment or how to pass it.

Observing the reactions of the two, Orochimaru's smile deepened. He relished the sensation of others struggling to decipher him, even though he had, admittedly, forgotten to provide an explanation beforehand.

"Attack me, and as long as either of you touches me, the assessment will be considered passed. It could be with your bodies, your ninjutsu, or your ninja tools – all are acceptable."

Orochimaru spoke slowly, forming hand seals again. However, this seal was unfamiliar to both, but they still readied their legs to run at any moment.

"Earth Release: Earth Shore Return!"

"Wind Release: Gale Palm!"

Just as Tatsuma wondered why Orochimaru had erected an earthen wall in front of him, he found the wall instantly shattering. A powerful gust of wind swept through, turning the broken wall into sharp projectiles that assailed him and Minato.

"Not good, can't escape."

Observing the extensive coverage of this ninjutsu, Tatsuma's eyelids twitched. There seemed to be no way to evade it. In this predicament, Tatsuma looked at Minato, who was sharing the same concern, and they both nodded simultaneously.

"Wild Lion's Mane Jutsu!"

"Ninja Art·Needle Jizo!"

Both of them swiftly formed hand seals. Minato's golden hair immediately grew wild, enveloping the two of them. Tatsuma's blue and white hair, on the other hand, surged behind him and entwined around the tree stumps that Orochimaru's Wind Cutter Technique had severed.

"Thud thud thud~"

Tatsuma suddenly jerked his head forward. As the fragments of earth approached within two meters of the two, several large tree stumps materialized in front of them, serving as shields against the flying debris.

Meanwhile, the hand seals of Tatsuma and Minato were not yet complete. The moment Tatsuma finished his hand seals, he seemingly descended into the ground like a plummet. Simultaneously, when Minato completed his hand seals, a Transformation Jutsu clone manifested in Tatsuma's original position.

As the tree stumps were removed, Orochimaru, observing the two unscathed individuals, suddenly lowered his gaze, then forcefully stomped the ground.

"Bang~"

Tatsuma, who had employed the Double Suicide Decapitation Jutsu to infiltrate the ground, hadn't closed in yet when Orochimaru's formidable force erupted from the ground, shaking him out.

However, Tatsuma didn't yield; his strands of hair launched an assault on Orochimaru.

"Jiraiya's technique, but too slow."

Orochimaru drew a Kunai, condensing Wind Release chakra in his mouth. With a breath towards the Kunai, a Chakra longsword materialized. He swung the Chakra blade, severing all the hair that approached him.

But at that moment, two strands of golden hair burst through the ground, entwining around Orochimaru's legs.

"Continuous mutual protection, truly an impressive tactic."

Looking down at his entangled legs and then at the smiling faces of the two, Orochimaru laughed even more brilliantly than them because, in the next moment,

"Bang!"

Smoke rose, and Orochimaru vanished. Tatsuma and Minato's smiles froze on their faces, not realizing when Orochimaru had employed the Shadow Clone Jutsu.

"The Ninjutsu just now blocked my vision and also blocked yours."

At this moment, Orochimaru suddenly emerged from behind Sarutobi Atoma. Clearly, he had utilized the taller and more imposing figure of Sarutobi Atoma to perfectly conceal his own presence.

Seeing this, Tatsuma and Minato wore expressions of resignation. Moreover, to seize this opportunity, they had very little chakra remaining. Orochimaru, observing the two in their desperate situation, smirked sinisterly and said:

"No way out, huh? If there's no way out..."

Before he could finish his sentence, a sudden gust of wind swept through the training ground. The strands of hair that Orochimaru had severed from Tatsuma danced in the wind, and one happened to fall onto Orochimaru's shoulder.

Orochimaru looked at the strand of hair curling up without chakra and shook his head, saying, "It seems it's fate, after all."

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